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Posted by placebo on Jan-29-2004 21:08:

.p.

black clouds
blue skies
weather is like emotions
changes so frequently
unable to tell when a storm is going to hit
or when you might see a rainbow
black skies
blue clouds
something you'd never see
like you and me
something you'd never feel
because we're all stuck in the hell
i just want to fly
i just want to run
i just want to jump
into this ocean
into this sea
i just want to cut this cord
and set myself free

Posted by Tranc3 on Jan-29-2004 21:29:

I hate all haikus
Like the Winter they are all
Lifeless and boring

Posted by {b.s.e.} on Jan-29-2004 21:34:

haikus can be used
to shed light on a subject
in a subtle way

Posted by Tranc3 on Jan-29-2004 21:52:

quote:
Originally posted by {b.s.e.}
haikus can be used
to shed light on a subject
in a subtle way

Hey! You didn't make
A reference to one of
the many seasons

Posted by {b.s.e.} on Jan-29-2004 22:03:

like summer, i am
careless and without forethought
my sun never sets

Posted by Trance-Aqua on Jan-29-2004 22:34:

Like winter
My sunligh drowns early
And my soul relievs,
The pain that was gained
Through that same winter day

Posted by DJ_NRG on Jan-30-2004 02:41:

Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
I hate poems that don't rhyme.

Posted by DJ Silhouette on Jan-30-2004 02:46:

I make pee pee,
I make poo,
It sure smells an awful lot like you.

The End.