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Posted by Mark Johnson on Feb-07-2004 19:53:

Pleas rate my new tune

I have just finished makin a new track and would love to have some feedback from you guys. Play or save the file from this link here

MP3 clip

All constructive criticism welcome. Thanks

Mark

Posted by Sean Walsh on Feb-07-2004 23:15:

Nice melodies, think this has a lot of potential. The bassline IMO sounds very soft-synth'ish and would be the main thing I'd change with this tune. It could also use a lot thicker percussions, the ones you have in there right now are pretty simple. The breakdown/buildup drags on a little for my tastes and it lacks energy after the buildup, but I think that's only because of the bassline and percussions. Work on those two elements and you'll have a great track here.

Posted by Mark Johnson on Feb-08-2004 14:52:

Cheers for the feedback man. Will have a look at boosting the bottom end frequencies on the bassline and maybe adding in another drum sound too. Thanks

Posted by _Marco_ on Feb-08-2004 19:21:

well i dont like the melodies in the beginning but thats just my tastes. the breakdown is really cool and the main melody awesome.
after the breakdown i think it needs a good driving hat cuz doesnt really add something imo.

Worth a listen definately.
nice job

Posted by RaverBabySy on Feb-08-2004 23:26:

Percussions are ok, would benefit from a regular off beat open hat.

The bassline I don't like at all, just doesn't fit (maybe shift it all along 1/16) And as has been said is way to synthy.

Early melody sounds nice as does the lead. Pads could have a little more impact but thats just me.

As has been said there is potential. Find a track with similar parts and compare to see how you could make them sound better.

Keep at it

Posted by Mark Johnson on Feb-12-2004 00:02:

Cheers guys. I have added a new bassline and have tweaked the hihats a bit. Think they were on a too higher frequency. Or my tweeters are just too good. Also have changed a few notes about so the track should sound warmer now.