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Posted by rik4000 on Feb-20-2004 16:22:

My latest Tune, please listen

hey have a listen and tell me what you think

its called Atmos'Fear'

www.eng.nene.ac.uk/~bf01riot/Atmos'Fear'.mp3

cheers

Posted by alanzo on Feb-20-2004 20:23:

Good bass.. sounds very clear but the track DEFINITLY has to much treble.. I turned off the EQ and I can still barely stand to listen to it..

the piano is a good idea but I don't really like the composition (talking before the break at 2:15) after that it gets better but still seems a little funny to me and could use some more reverb..

over all really good.. just get rid of all the treble.. I have a headach now

Posted by djHollen on Feb-20-2004 20:27:

Atmos? From FFX?
Im downloading now.
Ill let you know my impressions in a bit!
...

Posted by Tranc3 on Feb-20-2004 22:36:

This track is way too predictable for my tastes, I was able to predict (in advance) everything from the overall structure of the piece to the chord progressions used. Not my cup of tea, but the production values aren't too shabby.

Posted by djHollen on Feb-20-2004 23:47:

Hey rik4000,

I actually like this peice. I do find it a little predictable, maybe a little too much so. But its a great base to start from! I especially like the sythn you used, not for the main melody but the underlying pads. They sound real original to me. As for quality it all sounds great. If this was one of my first song I would be proud. And hey thats a nice bassline (but perhaps too much treb on it as alanzo pointed out - although it didnt over power anything on my system).
So overall, good job. I enjoyed it. Your effects are pretty cool.
One question though: Whyd you title this song "Fear"? The song is very uplifting and sounds almost happy. Just curious.

Take care rik4000,

Hollen

Posted by rik4000 on Feb-21-2004 11:51:

cheers for the comments peeps, you are right about the treble and it will be lowered

cheers

Posted by nic01445 on Feb-21-2004 17:40:

I like the bass riff, but i think the sample is kinda cheesy. OMG, the trebble, the pain! Pretty good percussion . I like the piano. Well, i did for a bit, but it never really changed, so i like it less now. I like the use of unique samples. The lead is a bit cheesy. Not bad, but kinda cheesy. I think you could really use some chords with the the lead; that would make it sound much more rich. nice work