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dj-rob pres. erratic - aeon (original mix)
Here is my best track yet, under a new alias... erratic
Hopefully you guys will like this track...
Uplifting/Melodic trance
http://dj-rob.vugaming.com/dj%20rob...inal%20mix).mp3
Any problems, wanna remix? let me know.
any comments??
link dosent work.
alright thanks for letting me know... it should be working now
Little changes in the melody could do good. Nice strings and combination of sounds
The bassline sounds great too with the melody.
To sum it all up: I love it!
I like it also, but I think a heavy Hipass and reverb on the strings would have accentuated them and made them more powerful. I like how you cut out the bassline in the middle too, kept me in to it.
sounds very nice! really digging this melody!
in the intro and the outro the bassline and the synth in the back play the same notes as in one of those push songs if im not mistaken
good job
john
Pros:
- build up
- arp ( each note from left to right )
Cons:
- Pad
Shit. I just wrote a huge post about this, and then did something and deleted all the text! doh! undo didn't bring it back...
Trying to say it all again...sorry if I'm short, i can't be bothered writing it all out in full
Great production. Excellent drums + fills especially. Lots of interest.
Chord Progression : nice but not uplifting enough. Wants more attitude / tension. Chords point downwards, I think it's really hard to make uplifting trance with a downwards chord progression.
I want to be able to produce + mix as well as this!!!
Sounds very good indeed, loads of nice soundings elements here. Overall sound and structure is very good. Melody is good but a little more variation would help.
Overall - very good stuff. Keep it up!
excellent track, i dunno why there arenīt many replies, but the song is great, sounds really pro and the bass kick ass
nice strings indeed..don't like that filterd kinda acid synth, don't fit at all imo.*but thats taste*
nice break , like the melody that is coming up..
would be very nice if a good counter melody kicks in.
good filled track i agree
nice job
Re: dj-rob pres. erratic - aeon (original mix)
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Originally posted by dj-rob Here is my best track yet, under a new alias... erratic Hopefully you guys will like this track... Uplifting/Melodic trance http://download.sectionz.com/{F7E3F...ck_39309281.mp3 Heres a backup mirror http://www.insanegamers.net/dj-rob/...iginal mix).mp3 Any problems, wanna remix? let me know. ![]() |
both links down.
fixed
starts out very very driving, excellent intro so far, very nice acid 303 sound and arps and percussion. Cant really fault anything so far, beat is veyr nice, aswell is the bass. Then the bassline key change comes, not very original but it still works very nice. Nice pads in the back now. Breakdown comes in, like usual. Very nice pads, i can hear that you have some pr0 tools, this sounds very very ncie. Im waiting for the main melody now, because the melody that the pads are playing doesnt bother me 2 much. Main melody = nice , but i dont really dig the synth, its to sharp. Climax is very very nice, bassline really pushes this thing to a next level, no sjit, in combination with kick and percussion this song even drives and gets me dancing with a complete sjit melody. Change to main synth and make some melody changes and this track is release worthy.
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Chord Progression : nice but not uplifting enough. Wants more attitude / tension. Chords point downwards, I think it's really hard to make uplifting trance with a downwards chord progression. |
omg u suck!! this is utter crap!
haha lol.. its ace offcourse... u made it!
The production sounds nice and tight, very nice indeed. like the chord change that comes in. good flow to the break, I like the actual riff aswell in the break, sounds good.
Maybe lacks a little ooomph when it comes back in after the break, but thats personal opinion.
Overall sounds very good indeed.
The melody you used sound so familiar to me. Have you posted a sample before?
I like the song. Cool Fx you made
Overall I like it, the only thing that I don't like is the synth used for the melody... sounds kinda... silly if you know what I mean. It's hard to describe, but I like the track overall!
it's really good
the pads in the breakdown seemed kind of strange, but i think it was because of the sound and also because the melody part was missing so they didn't make as much sense being the harmony alone. maybe if you added some effects to the pad sound for just the breakdown part and maybe put the melody in the breakdown too but with a different filtered sound..
other than that, it sounded really awesome.
Killer stuff m8,I didnt expect anything less after listening to 'within' ! Keep up the good work and hope to hear more from you.
Everything is pretty good, the plucking meldoy carries it through. That new melody which comes in at 1:58, has a bit too much input on the delay and not enough feedback, it seems to just delay once and then it's gone.
Got a nice feeling at 3:45 with the pads there and the bass is nice.
Good work, can't really fault you on anything else.
Overall: 8/10
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