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Posted by dj-rob on Feb-23-2004 05:35:

Smoking ..umm..something dj-rob pres. erratic - aeon (original mix)

Here is my best track yet, under a new alias... erratic

Hopefully you guys will like this track...

Uplifting/Melodic trance

http://dj-rob.vugaming.com/dj%20rob...inal%20mix).mp3

Any problems, wanna remix? let me know.


Posted by dj-rob on Feb-24-2004 05:14:

Dunno

any comments??




Posted by Zombie14 on Feb-24-2004 05:18:

link dosent work.


Posted by dj-rob on Feb-24-2004 05:21:

alright thanks for letting me know... it should be working now


Posted by M1cro5lave on Feb-24-2004 08:10:

Little changes in the melody could do good. Nice strings and combination of sounds
The bassline sounds great too with the melody.

To sum it all up: I love it!


Posted by StealthAssassin on Feb-24-2004 08:21:

I like it also, but I think a heavy Hipass and reverb on the strings would have accentuated them and made them more powerful. I like how you cut out the bassline in the middle too, kept me in to it.


Posted by John on Feb-25-2004 11:21:

sounds very nice! really digging this melody!
in the intro and the outro the bassline and the synth in the back play the same notes as in one of those push songs if im not mistaken
good job

john


Posted by The Designer on Feb-25-2004 13:03:

Pros:
- build up
- arp ( each note from left to right )
Cons:
- Pad


Posted by pho mo on Feb-25-2004 13:15:

Shit. I just wrote a huge post about this, and then did something and deleted all the text! doh! undo didn't bring it back...

Trying to say it all again...sorry if I'm short, i can't be bothered writing it all out in full

Great production. Excellent drums + fills especially. Lots of interest.

Chord Progression : nice but not uplifting enough. Wants more attitude / tension. Chords point downwards, I think it's really hard to make uplifting trance with a downwards chord progression.

I want to be able to produce + mix as well as this!!!


Posted by Fundamental on Feb-25-2004 14:59:

Sounds very good indeed, loads of nice soundings elements here. Overall sound and structure is very good. Melody is good but a little more variation would help.

Overall - very good stuff. Keep it up!


Posted by dj_pontiac on Feb-26-2004 17:37:

excellent track, i dunno why there arenīt many replies, but the song is great, sounds really pro and the bass kick ass


Posted by Massive84 on Feb-26-2004 19:37:

nice strings indeed..don't like that filterd kinda acid synth, don't fit at all imo.*but thats taste*

nice break , like the melody that is coming up..

would be very nice if a good counter melody kicks in.

good filled track i agree

nice job


Posted by Mac on Jul-18-2004 11:00:

Re: dj-rob pres. erratic - aeon (original mix)

quote:
Originally posted by dj-rob
Here is my best track yet, under a new alias... erratic

Hopefully you guys will like this track...

Uplifting/Melodic trance

http://download.sectionz.com/{F7E3F...ck_39309281.mp3
Heres a backup mirror
http://www.insanegamers.net/dj-rob/...iginal mix).mp3

Any problems, wanna remix? let me know.



I would like to listen to this but the link is broken.Is it signed already ?!


Posted by DjCommisad on Jul-18-2004 12:15:

both links down.


Posted by dj-rob on Jul-18-2004 16:11:

fixed


Posted by Stino on Jul-18-2004 18:13:

starts out very very driving, excellent intro so far, very nice acid 303 sound and arps and percussion. Cant really fault anything so far, beat is veyr nice, aswell is the bass. Then the bassline key change comes, not very original but it still works very nice. Nice pads in the back now. Breakdown comes in, like usual. Very nice pads, i can hear that you have some pr0 tools, this sounds very very ncie. Im waiting for the main melody now, because the melody that the pads are playing doesnt bother me 2 much. Main melody = nice , but i dont really dig the synth, its to sharp. Climax is very very nice, bassline really pushes this thing to a next level, no sjit, in combination with kick and percussion this song even drives and gets me dancing with a complete sjit melody. Change to main synth and make some melody changes and this track is release worthy.


Posted by Etherium on Jul-18-2004 23:54:

quote:
Chord Progression : nice but not uplifting enough. Wants more attitude / tension. Chords point downwards, I think it's really hard to make uplifting trance with a downwards chord progression.


Hmmm, not sure about that. Check out Above and Beyond's productions.


Posted by itsamemario on Jul-19-2004 14:26:

omg u suck!! this is utter crap!


haha lol.. its ace offcourse... u made it!


Posted by activa on Jul-19-2004 17:12:

The production sounds nice and tight, very nice indeed. like the chord change that comes in. good flow to the break, I like the actual riff aswell in the break, sounds good.
Maybe lacks a little ooomph when it comes back in after the break, but thats personal opinion.
Overall sounds very good indeed.


Posted by Timothy on Jul-19-2004 17:49:

The melody you used sound so familiar to me. Have you posted a sample before?

I like the song. Cool Fx you made


Posted by Stories on Jul-20-2004 01:09:

Overall I like it, the only thing that I don't like is the synth used for the melody... sounds kinda... silly if you know what I mean. It's hard to describe, but I like the track overall!


Posted by extalin on Jul-20-2004 02:51:

it's really good

the pads in the breakdown seemed kind of strange, but i think it was because of the sound and also because the melody part was missing so they didn't make as much sense being the harmony alone. maybe if you added some effects to the pad sound for just the breakdown part and maybe put the melody in the breakdown too but with a different filtered sound..

other than that, it sounded really awesome.


Posted by Mac on Jul-20-2004 07:36:

Killer stuff m8,I didnt expect anything less after listening to 'within' ! Keep up the good work and hope to hear more from you.


Posted by Woody4eva on Jul-20-2004 11:48:

Everything is pretty good, the plucking meldoy carries it through. That new melody which comes in at 1:58, has a bit too much input on the delay and not enough feedback, it seems to just delay once and then it's gone.

Got a nice feeling at 3:45 with the pads there and the bass is nice.

Good work, can't really fault you on anything else.

Overall: 8/10



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