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-- Rate My Tune (But Be Nice) *LOL*
Rate My Tune (But Be Nice) *LOL* ***UPDATE!!!
I'm putting together a track. I'm still workin on sounds, melodies, percussions etc but so far this is the idea & what i've come up with...
Feedback would be greatly appreciated but remember be nice *LOL*!!!
********TUNE HAS NEW CHANGES SO FOR THOSE WHO HAVE MISSED OUT NOW IS YOUR CHANCE TO LISTEN!!!!!!!!
click here to listen
..it's not bad,
but either way it has potential 
nice
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| Originally posted by Schryer Hey Bro. That is a sweet Tune! Keep it up, you'll hit the charts someday and hopefully I'll get a copy to drive the crowd wild! Send me all your productions, I would love to hear them! See you at Systems. |
yep... this track is ready to go to a mastering house where all the tweaking is done then out to a record pressing plant to get the promo copies pressed then off to chase down the record labels u go!
me likey!
Hmmm... good job Richard.
That percussive ride sort of sample that has the rhythmic pattern 'long, short-short', take the reverb off it. I like how sharp it sounds, but the reverb (or whatever) makes it sound like someone's playing pingpong.
The bottom end needs to be thicker too methinks, but that could just be my computer. Sounds like you've got it compressed well. Maybe too well. I don't know... Have a look @ that.
Those are my suggestions. Again, good job.
nice job Rich
couple of things you can add one: vocal samples will feet properly
some atmospheric stubbs on top of your melody part and also some drums percussions will do be awesome as well
overall it is an awesome work.....
well guys, thank you very much for the feedback! ive removed the track and will post it up at a later date once adjustments have been made!!!
thanks again everyone!!!
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| Originally posted by richard raiban well guys, thank you very much for the feedback! ive removed the track and will post it up at a later date once adjustments have been made!!! thanks again everyone!!! |
no wonder i get perfectnav.
oh well cant wait until you post it again.
I'd like to hear this.
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| Originally posted by dj_moonshine ahhh no wonder i get perfectnav. oh well cant wait until you post it again. |
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| Originally posted by breathesteve I'd like to hear this. |
Ill have a listen but drop me a line. im looking for more canadian producers to have on my show
Ampz
[email protected] or PM me
First of all~~
Im new to TAs and i have no idea how Djing or producing works
But dude..this IS a great tune~!
at first i didnt expect it to be at the level of other professionally produced tracks i download from kazaa...
but as i listened on.....i totally forgot it was a sample posted by an amatuer(!?)(non-professional if you prefer) and i had my head nodding while i was browsing thru the forums!
Good Job Richard~
Kudos to you for being able to do that. its way better then I could do.
sequenced very well.
sounds are amature - obviously you prolly didn't use any hardware, or perhaps very old or inexpensive hardware.
the bass line only has 2 notes though B and D - and i find it very hard to create a whole song around only 2 notes - so you did a good job doing that with your various melody layers.
rhythem is good
beats are good with variety
good luck - you are on the right track
for an amature I rate it 8/10
for a professional I rate it a 2/10 - sorry was that not nice or is that ok
your main riff has got potential... keep building around it. but the sound that comes in at 7:53 ( i dunno how to describe the sound.. i hope you know what i mean, =P... its kind of like a muffled growl?) is really out of place... it sticks out like a sore thumb... just my opinion.. keep up the work, =)
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