My first release track (feedback please)

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Posted by MoonWeapon on Apr-19-2004 19:17:

My first release track (feedback please)

This is the first track I have released to the public ever..and a link to another..neither are mastered, I am trying to learn how but I honestly don't think I have good enough speakers.

Please let me know what you think. Thanks

-Skylogic/MoonWeapon

Contact was the one I want to put emphasis on..Last Unity is secondary

http://www.chicagosoundform.com/acc...gic-Contact.mp3
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http://www.chicagosoundform.com/acc...n-LastUnity.mp3

thanks guys

Posted by AaroNoct on Apr-19-2004 20:56:

Have you ever played the original Mortal Kombat? That's what the intro to Last Unity sounds like to me. The kick just isn't turning me on. The signal to noise ratio isn't very good. I can hear the noise floor, and some slight buzzing, maybe a ground loop? The snare sound that comes in really drives the nail in the coffin.

1.) work on constructing / finding a better kick sound
2.) the bass layer isn't grooving with the kick.
3.) the transitions are kind of boring and predictable, work on that

The pad that comes in is slightly interesting. Try starting out with that and building on it.

Posted by MoonWeapon on Apr-19-2004 21:04:

Thanks for the feedback, ok so I said it wasn't properly mastered, maybe the bassline needs some work, that is my first ever mixdown using external instruments rather than all vsti's so yes, there is a buzz :-\ (I need better equipment) Any feedback on the other track? (contact) ? thanks

I do appreciate the feedback, its fine, please..show me no mercy

And ive just been informed that the download for Contact was broken..its fixed