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Sebraa - Emotional Intelligence

Hello!

Here we go ->
Emotional Intelligence

My first clip HERE in amateur forum!
All comments are very welcome

Inspired by M.I.K.E.

for my eyes only: [email protected]

thanks for your time and comment

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Sebraa

Nice clip.

Reminds a bit of Rank 1..

Though don't really like the synth that starts same time with the bassline and kick.

not bad at all mate

well as I already told you on msn you really have to work on the clarity of the sound. It is a bit noisy at the moment. Needs some hardcore eq'ng & compressing

other than that I really liked it. Melody seemed pretty tight.. Just clean it up and I'll be happy to play it

this is really good for a start, people who start out like this will grow big, so thats u trust me on that

as for the song, reminds me of some old song i cant remember, maybe its rank 1 like Thunder5 said

really good start
keep it up

Pretty nice.

The synth reminds Turn Out The Lights (not a big fan of MIKE, so dont know if there are more tunes like that), but you've made it not so dark,more "happy", as i would call it.

keep it up

Nice dark trancer .
Not so keen on the main synth though.

I liked it. If u just started out I'd say this is really good. Does remind me of rank 1 4 sure.

I think you could use some more variation in the drum roll, doesn�t seem to quite work well, it also doesn�t initially seem to come in quite right either. The bass tone the other end of the kick is really good though, spot on.

Don't like the harshness of the main synth. This is good stuff mate, the power is definitely there. Any thoughts have already been said so great. Is this really your first track?!

thanks friends.

It's not my first track!! It's first track (upped) here in TA AMATEUR FORUM. Have produced about 8-9 years but after upgrading my systems can do more and want to climb on and on!

Main synth need 100% more EQ and less "harsh". Drumrolls and buildup are right now very primitive. Thanks for the comments again! hope someday finish the song and "up" it here too.

I just discovered that MIKE style synth and then the idea was born.
Really liked that synth. Besides all my friends are telling that I need more massive dark synththemes , because all my songs sound too happy

Very nice!

Quality tune and production. Spot on.
Loving those synths!

Yeah, nice tune. I like like melody a lot, but I don't like the background synth that plays from the start. I think the tune would sound better without it.

Thanks Fundamental ... I thought it so and I think finally I change that synth to some kind of church choir.

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Sebraa

i feel quality here

this very kewl, just liked this clip

wanna listen to more your stuff here

Thanks Focean! Full version coming soon

excellent overall!

personally I like that synth that is with the entire song, it is what defines this track. that�s what I think.

also think that the sound can be cleared up abit, sounds slightly muddy when the bass kicks in.

but I can definatly see this one beeing played on the clubs.

take care,

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Originally posted by DylanSwe excellent overall! personally I like that synth that is with the entire song, it is what defines this track. that�s what I think. also think that the sound can be cleared up abit, sounds slightly muddy when the bass kicks in. but I can definatly see this one beeing played on the clubs. take care,

i agree with him, i don't find the sounds to harsh, but the mix is a bit bad, i think if you clear that up you will have some cleare sounds.

The lead i liked, and it's definitly a club tune

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Originally posted by Spin Doctor I think you could use some more variation in the drum roll, doesn�t seem to quite work well, it also doesn�t initially seem to come in quite right either. The bass tone the other end of the kick is really good though, spot on.

The DRUMROLLS are weakest part in my production skills so any help would be good

MASSIVE84 & DylanSwe -> thanks for your comments! will check the frequencies 100% -> right now no DYNAMIC effects

hey whats up
i like the first synth you are using, yu have a nice bassline too.
the percs are good too, but perhaps you may want to lower the volume on the synth, as it sort of drowns out the rest of the stuff you are using, quality sounds nice =)
good job, post the finsihed up =)

Wow, now I see what everyone means by make un-cliche melodies. I love the synth you used for it. I suggest you bring the kick out just a tad, it seems kind of hidden. Also the snare sounds too, dry and frooty loops like. Needs more snare-like sound, I suggest distorting it or add noise to it. Other than than, this is fukin sweet. I can't wait for the full track!

It's a kool track man ! The noisy leads fits the rest of the track perfect IMO . It's catchy

// Jesper

I think the elements here are well produced here(lead, bass, kick, perc, etc...)

But like others said, there is a certain degree of mudiness. You need to fix the kick, it is taking up too much headroom (frequencies) and also the bass which is taking around the same frequencies as the kick and is really muddying it up. Also, you'll want to up the frequencies of the bass and give it more sparkle to it as it is a rolling bassline and plays a lot of notes fast so a deep sounding bass is no good for that.

Hope to hear some more from you and I think this is sounding quite good indeed

definitely original, the lead soungs great, although while it is original there could be some more fullness brought out in it.
bassline is fantastic.
post some more of this damn tune man! it's hard to get into it in 1 minute and 23 measly seconds, although i would really like to.

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