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Posted by skies on May-11-2004 10:34:

New song/Feed Back

Hey this is one of my new songs.
Please give me some feed back.
It is called "stylus".

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/brianleemusic.htm

Thanks

Posted by Jay M on May-11-2004 10:43:

Who are you?

Posted by skies on May-11-2004 10:44:

Im new to this site but not trance.
My name is Brian and I have been producing for a while.

Posted by skies on May-11-2004 20:22:

Any feed back?
Please?

Posted by Jay M on May-11-2004 21:43:

so, what's a while?

Posted by skies on May-11-2004 21:48:

since 2002.

Can I just get some feed back?

Posted by Jay M on May-12-2004 11:13:

What software do you use?

Posted by Sunquest on May-12-2004 12:55:

LOL JayM stop torturing the guy

alright skies, the song is a good start, i can see u just starting to produce or are at a few months? who knows, but its a good start if ur new....
the computery sound is too computery, no good
but keep workin at it, ull get there

peace out

Posted by Jay M on May-12-2004 13:16:

Oww Sunquest just let me!

You know too that it's all about this.. I'm just making fun of the takers...

Posted by Mr.Mystery on May-12-2004 14:32:

quote:
Originally posted by skies
since 2002.

Can I just get some feed back?

You get what you give.

Posted by eulerfx on May-12-2004 16:37:

"Stylus" doesn't really change throughout the track. IMO add some scary industrial sfx and change it up a bit....have like a breakdown in the middle and add a deep bass line.

Like someone else said it sounds to computerish - cheesy. Also, if you're going for a non 4x4 beat in the track, might as well make it more interesting, or at least change it up a bit. I myself am not the master of a good beat, but I think I cant tell what sounds ok...

Otherwise it sounds pretty good, like its leading up to something nice and heavy.

Posted by skies on May-12-2004 19:03:

Ya, I tried to add some techno elements in it to see what a mix of techno and trance might be.

Posted by dan_Saviola on May-12-2004 20:41:

way too artificial im afraid. i have no idea how u can remove that but have a go.

Posted by skies on May-13-2004 10:22:

Too much techno/computery sounds?
Maybe...