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BT feat. Jan Johnston - Remember (LKD Breaks mix)
this was a fluke mix....
wasnt meant to be a remix..started workin with Max Q on tuesday on a new track and this was the final result of my boredom the rest of the week
>>>>LINK<<<< (right-click, save as)
I know this should be posted in teh production forum but i wanna keep it local.
constructive feedback is greatly appreciated.
PS. yes it does need alot more work
not a bad start!?
I like the chorus, it's destructive (in all the best of ways)!
btw...dont hold back in saying anythign bad about the track...i need all the feedback possible
(sorry max)
what has been done on the track so far is nice. You might want to incrase the # of instruments ur percussion has for the finnished copy.
i can't wait till i hear the synths u guys made for this.
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| Originally posted by DJ El Kay Dee btw...dont hold back in saying anythign bad about the track...i need all the feedback possible (sorry max) |
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| Originally posted by dEsidEL LKD .. ur contribution in the production is appalling .. great job Max ! |
nothing special actually,music is a lil bit depressing
i think you didn't caught the "tail of the idea" at the end
deffo need more adjustments-
its likeyou are in the middle of intersection on the red light and you don't know what to do -pull back ur car or go cross the intersection faster.
IMO i would add more vocal or change the beat... because in the way it is now its sooo depressing that i wanted to kill myself
i'd make it a lil bit faster or if you'll decide to stay with this beat you need to add more bass and "hide" this annoying sound that makes my hands shakin. just kiddin!!
good luck
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| Originally posted by Desp nothing special actually,music is a lil bit depressing i think you didn't caught the "tail of the idea" at the end deffo need more adjustments- its likeyou are in the middle of intersection on the red light and you don't know what to do -pull back ur car or go cross the intersection faster. IMO i would add more vocal or change the beat... because in the way it is now its sooo depressing that i wanted to kill myself i'd make it a lil bit faster or if you'll decide to stay with this beat you need to add more bass and "hide" this annoying sound that makes my hands shakin. just kiddin!! good luck |
thanks
Very fluke mix indeed (just downloaded this version now, Liam)
I like what you've done with it (nothing like what we started with that night
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I'll keep workin' on it some more.
(Btw.. i can't believe how well the vocals work in this... damn it's sexxy and dirteh)
Liam, great job man!
you want an idea how "dirty track" sounds like?
check this out : Gil Shwartz - Overdone (dirty mix)
I think its ok, the additions you've mad make it a darker track, which you may have been looking for but they come over a bit harsh
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| Originally posted by Desp you want an idea how "dirty track" sounds like? check this out : Gil Shwartz - Overdone (dirty mix) |
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| Originally posted by alec I think its ok, the additions you've mad make it a darker track, which you may have been looking for but they come over a bit harsh |

i like the general idea.. some more layers would make the track thicker and nicer
maybe you should add an attack on the bass synth so it doesnt come in so sudden (instead more gradual) and try to give it some more depth
maybe try some res or release on the melody.. or add an effect like delay on it
good start tho.. i like the break beat
a harder kick would also be nicer.. and another melody line could help fill in as well
good job so far tho.. keep up the good work
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| Originally posted by DJ El Kay Dee please explain which part makes it harsh..tahnks ![]() and yea dont mean to brag but i think i beatmatche the vocals better than sasha did with his mix (sorry but iwas comparing this afternoon) and please keep the feedback comin |
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