[Progressive Trance] Beach Tremors

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Posted by Dmatrox on May-23-2004 18:58:

[Progressive Trance] Beach Tremors

Title:Shawn V - Beach Tremors

Style: Progressive/Trancey

Length: 10:57

Bitrate: 128 Stereo

Production: Fruity Loops 3.4 with V-Station VST, Z3TA+ VST, + various WAV samples

Post Production: Soundforge, T-racks

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Dont expect this track to be pro, im still new at this. Please let me know what you think

Posted by BelgianGuru on May-23-2004 19:54:

It's not that bad, it's almost entirely mono though, maybe that's because of the way you compressed it dunno. That ticking thingy, like a metronome is working on my nerves after 10 minutes though It's a very thin song also. Try to fix that. And maybe ad some variation to it.

Posted by Digital Aura on May-23-2004 19:57:

read da rulez!!

1st... all clips are supposed to be at least 160kbps (as stated above)

OK-->oh no! not a whistle!! LOL Interesting percussion.. you a drummer? nice progression there with the perc loops. Crisp sounding.

Cant believe its fruity actually! Nice post prod work Matrox! The build at 4:30 is cool. This is progressive trance? I must be into more uplifting stuff...still waiting for a catchy melody...
any melody actually would be welcome. Maybe just me. Did you have vocals or acapella to this at one point? I would almost swear it.

That higher freq synth at about 6:30ish should maybe be developed into a better lead (or a melody even).

I was hoping for a buildup to something incredible but...
Great production values none-the-less, Matrox!

edit: oh yeah do the right thing... listen to mine now and trash..er .. critique my work!

Posted by Dmatrox on May-23-2004 20:11:

OK, thanks for the feedback guys.

quote:
It's not that bad, it's almost entirely mono though, maybe that's because of the way you compressed it dunno. That ticking thingy, like a metronome is working on my nerves after 10 minutes though It's a very thin song also. Try to fix that. And maybe ad some variation to it.

the ticking thing? i guess i gotta remove or change those hi hats.

Yeah i know its kinda thin. Im still struggling with that part. When i add more riffs i get melody clashes. So ill probably have to read up on some theory.

quote:
OK-->oh no! not a whistle!! LOL Interesting percussion.. you a drummer? nice progression there with the perc loops. Crisp sounding.

Cant believe its fruity actually! Nice post prod work Matrox! The build at 4:30 is cool. This is progressive trance? I must be into more uplifting stuff...still waiting for a catchy melody...
any melody actually would be welcome. Maybe just me. Did you have vocals or acapella to this at one point? I would almost swear it.

That higher freq synth at about 6:30ish should maybe be developed into a better lead (or a melody even).

I was hoping for a buildup to something incredible but...
Great production values none-the-less, Matrox!

edit: oh yeah do the right thing... listen to mine now and trash..er .. critique my work!

nah im not a drummer. Im trying to go for more between trance and progressive. I know what you mean by a catchy melody, i just suck at making them and making it in key with the rest. No i dont have any vocals or acapellas. Ill work on the build ups. And ill check out ur choon

Thanks for the feedback

Posted by Massive84 on May-25-2004 11:33:

sup

mint percussion, quit relaxing sounds, but they are a bit weak, and ya i miss a climax thingi or something catchy.

and the most important thing i didn't hear..a bass?

also you mite wanne improve the kick, and unless you won't add anything new , i suggest make it a bit shorter..

thats all

Posted by moore on May-25-2004 11:51:

The drum, percussion and the bass is very good produced. But the melody gets a bit boring imo.

Posted by djmxmind on Jul-24-2004 01:55:

Cool perc. man. . . .