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Posted by vanessa12 on May-25-2004 18:49:

new song

listen to this song and tell me what you think plz

Posted by Fundamental on May-25-2004 18:51:

Which song?

Posted by vanessa12 on May-25-2004 18:53:

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.as...s=156657&T=3342

oops, i thought i put an attatchment. its called down

Posted by Woody4eva on May-25-2004 19:02:

I see you've only been making music for about a year, so I won't pull this track apart as much as I could. But stick with it and you'll only get better.

I think that's the best way to reply to that.

Posted by vanessa12 on May-25-2004 19:05:

whats wrong with it???

Posted by Teknikol on May-25-2004 21:27:

quote:
Originally posted by vanessa12
whats wrong with it???

it's produced very amateurish. Sorry to put it this way, i have to be honest with you.

Drums are very minimal, synths & sounds are very weak, fx are way to minimal, the "vocal part" sounds very weird, the piano sound repeats all over again in a very irritating way, well that's about it.

all i can say is: try to listen to dance music alot, listen to the build up, use of effects, synth use, drumlines, basslines.

After this start to play with you music software/hardware and you'll see the improvements.

what did you use to make this?