[192kbps] erratic - within (original mix)

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Posted by dj-rob on May-27-2004 22:04:

[192kbps] erratic - within (original mix)

Hey, first full production in over two months. This one is a nice uplifter with a slight summer feel.

Title: Within
Type: Uplifting Trance
Length: 5:40
Size: 7.78mb

download erratic - within (original mix)

Thanks guys. (also let me know what I could change, remove, add etc as I will probably touch it up)

Posted by Massive84 on May-27-2004 23:12:

wow this sounds nice man..love the summer feel in this one..

maybe a tougher bassline and some congas or something to spice up the perc,

keeping in playlist

Posted by Sunquest on May-28-2004 00:00:

, really happy song, love the guitar, i swear if this song had vocals it would be the next signum - come around again
seriosly amazing stuff, i got no suggestions

find a vocalist to fill it in!!!!!!
amazing stuff

peace out

Posted by sausey on May-28-2004 05:01:

dj-rob,

Great job!

I remember a few weeks ago reviewing the work in progress and you�ve really developed it into a great sounding track.

Keep them coming!

-Mike

Posted by Sebraa on May-28-2004 08:25:

DJ-ROB!! Great uplifter! Really love the track ... these first sounded gated strings sounds little cheap and I recognize the ARMIN CHORD sound Nice work keep it up! Perfect string work!
Maybe more percussions? Everything else sounds perfect!

--
Sebraa

Posted by Subtle on May-28-2004 14:07:

plus
like the intro
lovely hi-hats
nice synths
nice FX
good produced

minus
melody comes too fast
sonds a little messy
unoriginal
some sounds are a little fogged out

conclusion
very nicely produced track, uplifting,the rhythm is very nice me love the hi hats, but I do think this style is a little outdated..

Posted by jwear2004 on May-28-2004 22:18:

Hey, good job! I like it quite a bit. It is both uplifting and summery at the same time. The only thing is that sometimes you get too much stuff going at once so it starts to clash and blur together. Maybe some careful eq'ing would do the trick. I definitely like the lead melody though. The effects are quite good also. One last thing, though I'm not sure how it would work in terms of the song's structure, is that the song is fairly short. If you don't mind, then it's fine, and I personally like the song anyways as it is, but if you could squeeze out a longer version then it might allow for more flexibility in a mix.

Posted by pho mo on May-30-2004 15:11:

There's a really, really nice feel about this track. The tune + arrangement are spot on.

I don't really have anything else constructive to say, except that you maybe just one night's work on the eq away from excellence here.

If all the elements meshed together just a little better then I would have really loved this track!

Posted by djrenco on Jun-29-2004 08:42:

hey matey, sounds very pro man! I love that guitar, pads are good. great 'envio/armin' lead. nice bass! anyway amazing production Rob!!
keep it up!

cheers,
Renco

Posted by soundrush on Jun-29-2004 09:04:

that tune feels fucking good. nice atmosphere. no cutup from me.

Posted by JamieShanley on Jul-11-2004 09:32:

its taken me a few days to reply but:

Solid track, builds well, I love it - can I use it?!
Definitely one of the best I've heard on this site!

Posted by Luke Terry on Jul-11-2004 10:25:

very nice, well produced, there seems to be too much reverb or summat in places tho. only other gripe is that it kicks in way to quickly, won't sound too pretty in the mix, good shit tho

Posted by activa on Jul-11-2004 16:45:

Wow....

Excelent work indeed. Great atmosphere, really like the guitar although it could do with being a little louder with a little less reverb, but that is personal opinion.
Nice little break at 3:40. Nicely led to the outro.

Quality work mate. Keep it up!

Posted by moolow on Jul-11-2004 21:58:

I really really love this! it so beautiful. Love the Ibizafeeling. Chilly and soft. The guitarsound is great! This will definitly join my collection of Summertracks!

Posted by citizeN on Jul-11-2004 22:07:

nice choice of soundss, and i see what you mean about the 'summer feel'.

My only gripe is that it sounds to 'messy' theres too many lead / pad / synth sounds contrasting with one another!

Maybe you should spend a little more time listening to various combinations of your melodies and seeing which ones work best!

I think that less is definately more!

Constructive criticism only though dude!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

regards

-citizeN

Posted by alanzo on Jul-11-2004 23:15:

production is pretty good.. I like the bass but the kick is a wee-bit too powerful..

the guitar needs more clarity

at some points it sounds very jumbled and messy.. like at 3:40

one of the best non-pro tracks i've heard on here though, non-the-less..

Posted by Mac on Jul-18-2004 10:51:

Brilliant !!! Very chilled and oldskool.This is gold.

Like the others said,clean up the track a bit and make it clear and send it to armin or something - I think this is asot stuff.Very Pro.You've done a fab job !