NEW TRACK: Subtle pres. Project Seven - Digital Wonders (Part I)

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Posted by Subtle on Jun-02-2004 15:29:

NEW TRACK: Subtle pres. Project Seven - Digital Wonders (Part I)

hi I recently finished a new track of my own in a long time..

style: trance
length: 8:13
BPM: 140
quality: 128 kbps

Project Seven - Digital Wonders (Part I) (right click download)

I was hoping to get some feedback on this one..

Posted by Tomas_P on Jun-03-2004 15:40:

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Posted by Subtle on Jun-03-2004 16:03:

thanks for pointing that out,

I changed the track name, well it is there now, if anybody would care to take a listen , it has a rather hard bassline.. I am very satisfied with it, cause it has some dark progressive touch..

Posted by Tomas_P on Jun-03-2004 16:34:

Well i'll try to give you my honest oppinion

For starters i don't like the basskick it's like it's like somebody's banging their head agains a barrel
The Bassline is good. Before the drop i pretty much like besides the bongo drums , sounds too repeative and let's the track down a bit. I like the breakdown and i really like the main lead. A good track (besides the bongos, the bongos made me crazy) keep up the good work

Posted by Subtle on Jun-03-2004 16:52:

quote:
Originally posted by Tomas_P
Well i'll try to give you my honest oppinion

For starters i don't like the basskick it's like it's like somebody's banging their head agains a barrel
The Bassline is good. Before the drop i pretty much like besides the bongo drums , sounds too repeative and let's the track down a bit. I like the breakdown and i really like the main lead. A good track (besides the bongos, the bongos made me crazy) keep up the good work
thanx for listening mate, the kickdrum is the "Bren F" kick through Scream distortion in Reason.. u don`t like the bongo drums =( .. I see,they are maybe a little Sahara`ish.. thanks for pointing that out

Posted by Jay M on Jun-03-2004 21:42:

Yikes! Kickdrum is a naughty one, don't like. Fortunately the massive bass takes over more of the attention. The lead coming then at 2:03 could use more high-end, it's hidden behind the bassline. Sahara bongo's are ok, just a bit too loud. Sounding big, not bad at that point. I'd check some levels and use a more clear and beautiful kick.. seems to clip because of that kick.

Melody is a bit too simple. Oh, sudden change here at 4:34.. don't like that one, you'd better keep it simple, because it sound ugly when it falls back, IMO.

Ok overall it's not bad, I'd suggest to bring a bit more variety in the percussions, and keep the melody simple (or a new one ). And find a better kick.. and keep us updated!

Peace
-Jay

Posted by madj0ben on Jun-04-2004 01:50:

the kick is not that good.. i didnt like it... and bongos is ok..
i like the main lead.. this is a good track... just change the kick..

Posted by EternalMusic on Jun-04-2004 16:13:

Hi there!

You need to change the kick fast . Anyway, Some of the melodys are out of sync - thats the most annoying thing about the track. The bongo aint bad, its just too simple i guess. You need to work on the transitions as well, the one at 7:19 is the worst one i think. The track needs some work on the musical part as i said before. Work on that before everything else .
Cheers, keep working.

Posted by Subtle on Jun-04-2004 21:45:

quote:
Originally posted by EternalMusic Some of the melodys are out of sync - thats the most annoying thing about the track
what do u mean by that really? thanks for listening