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Posted by azndragon0613 on Jun-15-2004 04:44:

DJ Art - **? Give me a listen!

hey guys! can ya give my new song a listen...i think it's the best i've done...anyways...i don't have a name for it so any suggestions would be nice. could you guys include whether you would play it or not to see if my song is ok.. thanks!

download here

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Posted by j dax on Jun-15-2004 05:47:

oh yes very nice indeed!

ummmmm, some comments....

er, they'll have to be nitpicking comments as it all sounds pretty good. Perhaps a slightly fuller kick? perhaps 2-3 bpm faster?

I'd dance to it!

Posted by azndragon0613 on Jun-15-2004 18:18:

thanks for the comment j dax

maybe i should speed up the bpm

Posted by DylanSwe on Jun-16-2004 10:11:

I would play it, definatly. But I feel that the kick is to sharp/hollow...it doesnt go well with the rest of the song.

the melodies are very nice and the samples used are excellent.
nice job!

Posted by azndragon0613 on Jun-17-2004 20:17:

awww come on... no more comments?

Posted by ABSYNTH on Jun-17-2004 23:01:

Litening now..........

Ok, the kick does not fit the track, your production is good but that kick does not do it any justice as it sounds too thin..

At the break... Melodie is nice, oooh the bass and percs
AHHH then that kick!!!

This is a good track and i if i were you i would sort that kick and work on the mix a little more and you have cracked it.

Good effort mate,

Dunk

Posted by azndragon0613 on Jun-20-2004 03:41:

i made song changes...see if hte new kick works

Posted by ilalin on Jun-20-2004 04:14:

The kick is hollow. Try using some of the kicks posted under production forum. The rest sounds good.