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-- Antonio Gomez - Summer Call (Original Mix)
Antonio Gomez - Summer Call (Original Mix)
Hi everybody 
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Just finished a track in the style i used to like when i started to listen to trance (Melodic buildup +bass progression). Abit cheese i must say but i Hope you like it, its abit different from my usual stuff. Let me know whats on your mind 
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Here
the intro isn't so cheesy man, its quite uplifting.
the breakdown is great
i really love this melody.
if it comes to taste for me this is your best track so far.
few things you should improve, the kick and perc.
i think the bass is a bit to loud, but am not 100% certain about it, let more people review first.
good job Antonio
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| Originally posted by Massive84 the intro isn't so cheesy man, its quite uplifting. the breakdown is great i really love this melody. if it comes to taste for me this is your best track so far. few things you should improve, the kick and perc. i think the bass is a bit to loud, but am not 100% certain about it, let more people review first. good job Antonio |
finally hehe,
good opening pad, kick and clap. cool bassline, does sound a tad loud though. nice synth on the buildup, good uplifting breakdown with a nice lead sound. The lead sounds a little bit cheesey, not too much just a bit. well, can't find that much wrong with this track to be honest, everything just flows nicely, good progressions, build ups, etc. good production !! nice job.
nice song! no comment! 7/10
top quality as usual 
ur mastering is perfect i gotta get some tips from u hehe
only suggestion i have is the main melody, that synth u have to raise the volume of it, or use a second layer sound for it, because its a little too quiet, could be more powerfull
but still awsome stuff
keep up ze good work
see u soon
That melody is great. Definatly a great summer-vibe. Like Sunquest said you should add a layer to the melody after a little bit, so it doesnt repeat the same thing over and over.
I really wish I could master like you. My kicks and bass are always soo muddy. 
Thanks guys!
Yea your right i need to layer it with another synth. Ron, catch me on MSN i'll help as much as i can . eulerfx - I can send you some compression presets for a kick, you use FL right? I can give you some tips if you want
Yeah that sounds good.
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| Originally posted by eulerfx Yeah that sounds good. |
Hey there mate!
Nice to hear from you again, gave you a review at the israeli forums.
great work!
i like the intro of this. i like to intro like that too =) (or something along those lines) , bassline coming in is good. although maybe add a bit more stuff int he beginning, feels kind of repetative to me. at 200 minutes it sgood. i like the breakdown pads, not a fan of that synth that you use for the melody, (fm synth?) i like fm synths but maybe get a different one, or whichever you like =). i like the overall progression of this song though =), good work mate =)
Hey,your tune is nice! BUT,I think you could improuve some parts aswell.
First of all,you should work on mixing and mastering. Don't forget to equalize your channels. Try making your instruments more distinctive (hope you understand what I mean). For example your bassline is a bit...flat. When I compare your tune with some pro stuff I hear the difference very clearly. Same for some other instruments. I think equaizing or compressing could help a lot!
About your mainlead... I liked it ! Reminds me a bit of Jurgen Vries. Not sure about the melody,just not my style but still OK.
Anyway,very good effort mate. Keep it up!
Interesting, the eq's are the last thing I would touch on this clean piece. It feels good when you play with my stereo-capable headphones. It is also clear that your electronic music production ability has reached the level at which critique begins to encroach on personal stylistic goals, so I will not critique. Nice clean production.
OK the bass is just to loud, after hearing it 100000 times. i finallly concluded that the bass is just to loud.
Really good work. The intro and build are quality. The bassline...doesn't sound too loud to me but I've got crap speakers, loud basslines are better for me coz you can actually hear them The kick is top notch!
The melody's not my thing, but that's more a matter of taste than a complaint..the melody's definetly right for the tune....I hope that makes sense.
Nice one
Hmm.. just realised that I had dled this "ages" ago.
Yeah.. the bassline is a bit too loud. Otherwise a great track..
Though the open hihat you used is so so used, common and often heard. but that is just a minor detail.
Good work on this one! Some sounds are indeed a little bit too flat. I like the ambients, as always in your tracks! A bit muddy, but that's just a matter of practise and time. Same with my tracks.
But you're surely improving, keep them coming!!
Greetz
-Jay
very nice!
Great work! Keep em coming
kick is nice
hihats not very good
the string is also nice
claps are good
and those melos in the backgrounds are great
bassline is awesome!
very powerfull
you should switch the hihats are give them a little eq
cauze they dont sounds very professional
im in 1:45 and till now the track sounds really great
k now some melody came
and she is nice
bass notes has change
sounds great!
string is nice+
but sounds alittle dry i think..
melody came
great sound!
very good melody..
awesome 
really awesome track
good work mate!
Thanks guys!
I've improved some things, mainly sound issuses, i'll post later .
Thanks again for the comments.
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| Originally posted by EternalMusic Thanks guys! I've improved some things, mainly sound issuses, i'll post later .Thanks again for the comments. |
man, I just need to reply on this one, what a great tune!! that melody is so awesome!!
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