Alan Nimmo Pres. Reticulum - Sonic Expander

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Posted by Alan Nimmo on Jul-08-2004 18:31:

Alan Nimmo Pres. Reticulum - Sonic Expander

Link removed--it's getting picked up by a label

Hey folks- This is my first time posting here and I'm bringing you my latest track that I've been working on.

I hope you enjoy it! Any comments would be gratefully accepted!!

-Alan Nimmo

Posted by nic01445 on Jul-08-2004 19:01:

Reminds me of System F. Very nice synths and pads. Could use some more percussion, me thinks. Nice lead. Very uplifting! My only real critique is the title of the track, which is woefully cheesy. Good job man!

Posted by Shad0wmaster on Jul-08-2004 20:13:

Amazing. Just fucking amazing. Great job!

Posted by Alan Nimmo on Jul-08-2004 20:23:

wow, that was fast! thhanks alot for listening guys! i'm glad you enjoyed it

PS: the name might go too

Posted by Shad0wmaster on Jul-08-2004 20:50:

No problem dude, I thoroughly enjoyed Do you have any more?

Send a copy of this to Armin, I bet it would stand a fair chance of getting played on ASOT

Posted by DJ-BEN on Jul-08-2004 20:58:

This my friend is amazing.

Will be sticking this onto CDR straight away.

I also think it's going to be in order to featur in my top 3 (out of my top 10) on my ' Total T.R.A.N.C.E! ' show which is broadcast on risefm.com , stormradio.tk and ets-global.org .

Please email me if you have any other work and if possible send me out a CDR with it on (or with this track it .wav format)

[email protected]

Wicked m8,

Ben! www.DJ-BEN.co.uk

Posted by Massive84 on Jul-08-2004 21:40:

indeed nice tune.

Posted by Mike_Foyle on Jul-08-2004 21:41:

i love this. very nice! i would suggest putting the key of the track up by a few semitones, just so that the bass isnt quite so low, i think it gets a bit lost in parts. also, something about it makes it sound like a low quality mp3. sounds are very good, and nice ending. i think maybe the mastering could do with a tiny bit of tweaking then u have urself a wicked track. i love the melody, sounds and ideas. i like the side chaining to!

Posted by Mario432 on Jul-08-2004 21:45:

Listening now...
WOW... VERY VERY NEAT... reminds me of something on a global trancemission CD.. OR any good mix for that matter.. I love it. Great transitions. love the synths the bass is great... Trying to find a critisism.. Maybe only thing is more interesting percs more than just the cymbal on the and of every beat.On the other hand its keeps it simple and to many percs might make it lose something.
the second main build up when your bring that pad with the side chaing or whatever, I like how you didnt overdo the buildup with shit loads of rolls etc etc. Dont know if that was on purpose.. but yeah I like to do that too, *(except yours is just a little bit better... hehe..more like an butt load ) Great reverby effects and noises there in the 1st break(i think its the 1st). Man very inspiring.... I got an electronic music show at my local radio station.... would you mind if I play this?) This is great, love playing great new tracks. KEEP IT UP!http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...26&forumid=74&#
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Posted by Alan Nimmo on Jul-09-2004 00:19:

Wow! Thanks for the input guys!

Posted by davidemonin on Jul-09-2004 07:17:

Real nice track, sending you a pm.

Posted by pho mo on Jul-09-2004 07:32:

Really, really good work man. Top track. One of the best tunes I've heard on TA in a while.

Breakdown at 6:27 = the shit. wow.

Posted by pho mo on Jul-09-2004 07:40:

Sorry for acting retardedly and posting again, but after listening to your track again it really is frickin awesome dude.

This track has "the very best part of a clubbing night" bits in it, which is quite an achievement.

Posted by DylanSwe on Jul-09-2004 09:39:

Yes yes..this is really really awesome...my idea of a perfect song, as mentioned the breakdown at 6.24 is so clinical executed that it gave me just the right feeling.

the drive and momentum of this track is pure talent! Eventough it seems to be a kind of repetitious melody you mix it so the track never gets boring.

my only complaint, is that the track sound muffled when the song is in "full bloom". It sounds like almost every element is at the same strength and nothign really stands out..I would like the melody to be abit louder..

but hey, maybe what I just mentioned is why I love this tune as much as I do..

forget it, dont change a thing! Im impressed beyond spectacular and just a tad jealous...

Posted by Mike_Foyle on Jul-09-2004 10:13:

nice one guys looks like uv impressed everyone it is a killer track.

Posted by Alan Nimmo on Jul-09-2004 21:34:

thanks alot there guys, im glad it seems to have gone down well

I really like it, but wasnt sure if it was just me!

Alan

Posted by Stories on Jul-09-2004 23:12:

Wow, this is a quality track. I love the powerful bass, the kicks that accompany it are also well done. The main melody is amazing... very Thrillseekers-ish to me, which is always a good thing! Keep up the great work!

Posted by Alan Nimmo on Jul-10-2004 15:07:

Thanks alot Stories, I'm glad you liked it!

Posted by .A.Y. on Jul-10-2004 15:18:

start listen now
didn't like the bass
kick is good
claps are great

you need to work about the quality!

very powerfull track
like it!

awesome melodies

omg awesome track

excellent work mate
but the quality needs a little work

Posted by Mike_Foyle on Jul-10-2004 15:21:

i think there are 2 things that make the quality sound slightly poor...

a) shift the notes up a few semitones so the bass isnt so low, i think it gets muffled and goes too low to be phat still.

b) there is almost no stereo depth, and this is soo easy to fix. I think you said already that you are working on the stereo depth but it would definately make a huge difference.

i know ull make it work, u have an extremely powerful track. in my opinion those 2 things would make it ownage. DEFINATELY needs stereo depth, its almost mono at the moment as i showed u by inverting the phases on one channel and then mixing them, there is almost no difference. see what you can do

Posted by Alan Nimmo on Jul-10-2004 16:23:

quote:
Originally posted by .A.Y.
start listen now
didn't like the bass
kick is good
claps are great

you need to work about the quality!

very powerfull track
like it!

awesome melodies

omg awesome track

excellent work mate
but the quality needs a little work

cool mate- when you say quality, can you explain a bit fuller so i can have a go at it? Do you mean eq? Mix? Thanks!

Mike, behave- you already told me this about 15-20 times on msn :P

Thanks again

Alan

Posted by Mike_Foyle on Jul-10-2004 17:04:

i know but i just had to mention it to see if anyone else noticed! i think thats the only reason the quality doesnt sound good as mentioned by .A.Y... i think the levels are perfect and eqing etc, just offering a sensible reason y it mite be that he thinks the quality sounded low

Posted by activa on Jul-13-2004 21:15:

What a god damn fucking dancefloor destroying tune!!!!!

I am really loving this, absolute quality work mate.

Posted by Alan Nimmo on Jul-14-2004 00:08:

Thanks alot m8 im glad you enjoyed it!

Posted by Psygnosis on Jul-14-2004 06:31:

I think this song is too good to be freely available, this is definite signing material, send it to labels and quickly remove the link i think.

Awesome song, had a slight Seraque feel to it, choon

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