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i3 - Daydream (susurration mix)
Hey guys check out my latest track...
Daydream (susurration mix)
comments and suggestion welcome..
I'd like to hear a version with slightly better quality. Or is my speakers going insane? 
Synths sounds good, so does the overall sound of it.
The frequences...sounds very thin, more sounds layers would really help to fill it up. It gets better in the last parts though.
Not to bad at all. The sudden crashes around the start of 2/3 of the track kind of scared me when I turned up the volume when it sounded so nice, lol (jumped high) 
After that it start to sound really good. But better quality would help to say some more about it. Good work!
the whole thing clips which is a shame, and also, as M1cro5lave said, the quality is quite poor, mostly due to the clipping and it sounds very over compressed. I also dont like the structure at the begining, i dont like how the bassline changes in only the first few bars, and it doesnt feel like there is any build up to the first break. its just suddenly there! also, the percs bore me, and i think ruin the track. that hi hat thats used in every trance track is a bit too loud and should be dropped in some places in my opinion, perhaps some extra layers or percs would help it out a bit. lovely tune, i dont think ive heard the original!!! I deffinately hate that hi hat. synths sound nice, bass is nice but i dont think it should really pan across the speakers like that. in general u aught to keep the low frequencies in the centre, especially if you are hoping for it to get played in a club. pan the higher frequencies all you like but i dont think its agood idea to have that bouncey pan on the bass. It could benefit from a few more elements in my opinion, especially in that second break. And those crashes that come in, OH MY GOD LOOSE THEM!!! lol those crashes ruin the feel of the track for me, they are so sudden and boring, if you insist on keeping them, lower the levels and put some reverb on or sumin i would. Only major complaint is the clipping and quality, when it all kicks off, i can hardly hear it. so thats all i can say about it really. hope this helps.
mike
oh and also, that effect that sounds like a man puking except slowed down lots, gotta loose that, it made me laugh! which im sure isnt the point in this track hehe. that effect is awful im sorry!!!
Remaster
Thanks guys for your feedback...Ill make some changes with the mastering and editing...Ive been messing with the mastering alot so bare with me..I also need a better attack bank...hehe
There will be a update soon....
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