Dana O - Regroup (Original Mix) [192]

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Posted by Dana-O- on Jul-18-2004 15:36:

Dana O - Regroup (Original Mix) [192]

Ok since my music got rejected from many lables i gaved up...
so here's my "Rejective" tune enjoy...
http://beibe.tnnet.fi/~tonza/mp3/Da...iginal_Mix).mp3

Posted by Jamz on Jul-18-2004 15:55:

The Mad Regent

Hi, i just had a listen to your track. My opinions might be irellavent to you but some people think my advice or knowledge is top of the line and some people say i have no idea what the hell im talking about. So judge for yourself.

Basically when i first started the song i knew strait away it was gonna be fairly heavy. has a nice beat and its pretty full. The songs a great idea and well worthy of a play on Digitally imported but label wise its not quite up there. The song has talent and if you can make tracks like this then you must be pretty Talented to. (Perry said u have a talented body btw :P )

Basically i think the song lacks Originality and its pretty Basic in ways. It was just the same old beat, fade off, build up, beat senario.
What i sugest u do is try to enhance the situation but dont make a mess of it. Try to put some Originality into it and make the Tranquility more effective.

Its like Tiesto said "So many People have computers and are making music now days, labels dont look for just good music they look for that extra special thing in a person"

Hope i helped in some way

Posted by pho mo on Jul-18-2004 16:02:

It's definitely a nice tune!
You've obviously got the talent to make a killer tune. Keep it up, and good luck dude!

Posted by Dana-O- on Jul-18-2004 16:05:

thankies
:P

Posted by Massive84 on Jul-18-2004 16:19:

mint start, bass sounds nice..kick also.

clap sounds a bit loud not to much 2-4 less volume i say.

the acid stab could be morhped in to an acidline would be cooler..

nice pads on the background in the intro.

nice melody in the break, but it could use some nice pads , the ones are playing are to thin..

melody sounds nice, but it's very muddy..

smooth out the snare roll. + its a bit to loud i think.

i like the additional riff on top of the lead..really nice.

don't see anything new added, so i don't think you should extend the track to a second climax.

overall a nice solid production, it needs just better edits and better mix, this has potential just need work.

Dana hmm, girl? if yes , cool to see girls making this kinda uplifting music .

Posted by Dana-O- on Jul-18-2004 16:51:

thanks , and yes im a girl

Posted by jessicah on Jul-19-2004 04:28:

yay, awesome to see a girl posting music.

I don't think it's a bad tune, just what everyone else says, could use a bit of an original punch. You obviously can throw a song together, just keep plodding.

Posted by davidemonin on Jul-19-2004 06:48:

Nice driving tune. Sent you a PM.

Posted by Mario432 on Jul-19-2004 08:33:

hey,
First off nice track!!
I guess I would only say make that first synth after the break have less delay, and make it sound a bit more atmospheric if you know what I mean. It comes in kind of sudden and harsh. It sounds like its trying to hard,, lighten it up a bit... I think I would play with it more too, as in introduce it in later maybe. Anyways just little gripes about a rad track though!

g2g bed

Posted by MK-S on Jul-19-2004 11:20:

I'd say the main thing to change would be the lead. To me it sounds a bit dry and in the background, the track would have more power if you brought it forward. Otherwise very nice! A bit standard yes, but technically very sound.

And yeah, I think you're like the first female trance producer Nice one.

Posted by Synergie on Jul-19-2004 14:09:

Clap is too loud! I like percusions.
Some sounds needs more FX like reverb...
I like your track till clap kicks in.

Posted by Stino on Jul-19-2004 21:55:

intro to the break is WICKED, with that very strange FX sample, wikkewikkewoh it sounds like that . I dont like that sine sound in the break, but i like the saw synth that comes up next, very atmospheric. Bassline owns, nuf said about bassline . Climax is OK, melody isnt really good, but i like that small FX so much so i keep listening . I like the 2nd melo line. Build off is ok

- V.Vision

Posted by DJ_LOOPer on Jul-20-2004 16:43:

This Track is fucking Great! But there is one mistake! U would to leave that melody after breakdown!!! That will be much better! Whatever, can I play this track in my set?