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Posted by Digital Aura on Aug-20-2004 13:52:

2nd Track.. UPDATED!!

Fellas!

I'm a regular reviewer of your productions! Please review my 2nd song found here:

Digital Aura - Of Spirit And Electronica [Ambient>Breakbeat>Trance]

Still new at this so I really need feedback!

Posted by conexion on Aug-20-2004 17:00:

This is not really my thing. But I personally cannot fault the production.

My only criticism would be the bass line at 4.00, it seems to falter in some way, feeling slightly out of time. But I cant quite say how. Maybe its just my ears

But as I said nice production.

Posted by State of Matter on Aug-20-2004 17:07:

Sounds good, very abstract and trippy. But I agree, the bassline does seem offbeat around the 4:00 mark.

Posted by montana on Aug-20-2004 18:03:

hmm, like the ideas & sounds, but it doesn't quite work for me in general

Posted by EliPsE on Aug-21-2004 04:56:

It seems you have improved from your first track. I like all the ideas on this track except sum of the things sound a bit off, like the little lead you got there,synth in middle and the piano. Could be the delay settings? after 5min the bass seems to be very low.

Anyway, pretty good just needs a lil work here and there
keep it up

Posted by Digital Aura on Aug-29-2004 00:55:

There we go...

Fixed the timing by quantizing the pads and the leads...
Changed the ending...
Remastered for punchier, louder mix.

Is this better?

Posted by Sunquest on Aug-29-2004 01:15:

hurray for canadian producers
sounds are very nice, then at 3:30 or whatever nice synth comes in, very PVD ish from LOVE PARADE in 1999
and DAMN , nice breakbeat BASS
THATS LOUD!!!!!
fucking quality id love to hear in a club
the voice is kewl
it actually sounds like a trance/ rnb track hehe
great track,
keep producing

Posted by Massive84 on Aug-29-2004 14:20:

cool start.
very cool start.....

ok now you should add some perc layers small ones, like from 1.24? to make it intresting.

3.01 oo i like that synth.

hmm snareroll..wtf? 4/4 and a hardstyle bass?

ahh, you should kept this in theme ambient and relaxing, i don't like that bassline, it's funky but don't really do it for in this.*this is taste btw*

that guitar kinda lead(distorted?) is nice, piano also.

can't say alot about the mixing, headphones review .

yup someone improved alot .

Posted by Digital Aura on Aug-29-2004 16:50:

K ..thx Massive and Sunquest. I'm thinkin of making a CHILL only version of this because of everyones feedback.
Cheers!

Posted by TriXed on Aug-30-2004 02:47:

Yeah judging from what ive heard from the start.. 3.35 in.. Really chilling and would be great for a chill out type tune Very nice work!

Posted by josh on Aug-30-2004 05:41:

Idea is that and very soothing and nice mate!

But the only complain I will say is the bassline. I personally dun like that kind of 'harsh' bassline to be in when the rest of ur song sound so comfy. Try something not so harsh and perhap u try Eq it?

Well done mate! Good job! Cheers!

Posted by Timothy on Aug-30-2004 06:24:

nice production.

Posted by Arctic Breeze on Oct-03-2004 04:27:

This is the kind of music I like on Sunday mornings. Keep it up
It's about all I have to say, I really like this one!

Posted by alexpea on Oct-03-2004 20:11:

Hi!
Really nice pads you've made here dude!!! This is very chill. I'm lovin it! Oh, I was waiting for those kicks at 02.01, but I expected 4 on the floor... I think that have been better. Then the tune would haev been more progressive-stylish

Wow, at 03.55 the track totally changes atmosphere and suddenly becomes very proggy! I think this kind of music would fit nicely into a movie or something... Seriously! Contact Peter Jackson and ask if he wants some background-music for his new movie!

Posted by extalin on Oct-03-2004 22:07:

i love the intro and the whole track is nice too. the pads are especially good sounding. i also really dig that hard bass that comes in around 3:53.. the way you switch from chilly to 4x4 is really cool. good work!

Posted by EternalMusic on Oct-04-2004 09:07:

Hi,

Cant comment on the sound quality cause im listening the lo fi version. The Intro is nice, but becomes abit boring after a while. Some extra strings would to thejob. The B synth is wonderful, fucking awesome stuff there. The whole idea is nice mate. Didnt like the trany part. The kick there is abit weak. Something you need to work on is your varity, the whole track is based on almost one melody, it gets too monotonic after a while.

Keep working lad, nice job .

Posted by kopi_luwak on Oct-04-2004 18:34:

This is really nice kinda Ibiza and cafe del mar stuff,very relaxing,great work dude .
Kopi =o.