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-- Sunquest - Just Another Day *[FULL 192 Kbps]*


Posted by Sunquest on Aug-23-2004 18:23:

Smiley DJ Sunquest - Just Another Day *[FULL 192 Kbps]*

hey guys, ive finished the song, decided to share with u fellas since ur all so nice hehe

Genre: Trance
Length: 7:55
Quality: 192 kbps
Direct Download Link:
http://jamescosgroveonline.com/sunq..._TA's_Only).mp3

im still open to suggestions,
njoy


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Aug-23-2004 18:38:

Hmm, take a further look into the mastering, the bass/beat combo is overpowering just about everything else. They also sound quite muffled/lofi.
Your synths sound very thin and softwarey (Subtractor?), try adding multiple layers and unison to them. Your percs are also way too simplistic (or just drowned out by the bass) and don't create any kind of drive to the track. They also seem to be the same throughout the track, a bit of variation would be good.
I would also consider putting a longer breakdown in there and something different for the second part, it gets a bit too repetitive towards the end.

All in all you have a good melody and some nice ideas here but your production needs tightening up.


Posted by Sunquest on Aug-23-2004 18:47:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Hmm, take a further look into the mastering, the bass/beat combo is overpowering just about everything else. They also sound quite muffled/lofi.
Your synths sound very thin and softwarey (Subtractor?), try adding multiple layers and unison to them. Your percs are also way too simplistic (or just drowned out by the bass) and don't create any kind of drive to the track. They also seem to be the same throughout the track, a bit of variation would be good.
I would also consider putting a longer breakdown in there and something different for the second part, it gets a bit too repetitive towards the end.

All in all you have a good melody and some nice ideas here but your production needs tightening up.


got it
will keep workin at it


Posted by music2dance2 on Aug-23-2004 20:59:

superb stuff once again mate, where do you get those melodies LOL excellent!


Posted by Stories on Aug-24-2004 17:34:

One of the synths used in the melody, starts early in the track with the lead/buildup, is a god awful (sounds like it came off a NES), but the melody itself is massive and beautifully arranged. Nice production, although it seems the mastering needs a bit of work?


Posted by Vizay on Aug-25-2004 00:11:

great track, can't really hear that typical softwaresound, imo it sounds good, just need a big portion of work at the mixing stage.

ohh and btw. make shure you don't forget to cut at 16000hz when you master it, my ears are bleading from the high frequencies right now



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