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Posted by Mane on Sep-15-2004 23:43:

[Trance]Mane - Sirius[128]

Hello
Ive made this track 30 min ago,I was making it for 5 h I started at 20 and done it at 1 I was inspired by music one of the up/coming producer and the title comes from producer of peanuts which i was eating during making track lol hope you will like my track and as always all feedbacks are welcome

Mane - Sirius
http://www.audiostreet.net/artists/005/066/mane.html

gretings

Lukas

Posted by Thunder5 on Sep-16-2004 01:01:

Writing as listening..

Track builds up nice. Somehow reminds me of some PvD's work.

The break sounds sweet..

Overall pretty cool track..

Keep on it.

-Matti-

Posted by DjCommisad on Sep-16-2004 01:34:

good stuff. quite enjoyable.

Posted by Sunquest on Sep-16-2004 01:40:

i see u like ambient sounds nature stuff , i love that shit too, very soothing
so about ur track, kick beats bass all excellent, nothing to say there, now comes the pvd style as dj thunder said before
melody is a little light, i think u can add maybe another layer or something? but overall great mastering, and really soothing track
very nice style u got urself , keep it up
peace out

Posted by optik on Sep-16-2004 01:59:

did this over at mpfspromotions.com

see review there

Posted by Mane on Sep-16-2004 08:29:

thx guys for feedbacks really apreciate

Posted by The Green Link on Sep-16-2004 10:06:

Melody needs to be improved - as said before by adding some layers or so. It is not a quite strong melody. What is there that will remind the listener of this song? I would redo the melody just 2 make the song more unique.

Posted by Jay M on Sep-16-2004 19:47:

Ok i hear the eq-ing worked out better. It all sounds nice together. Maybe lower the volume of the hats jsut a bit.
It's quite a drag till something happens, it's far too static. Extra melody isn't a making me warm..
Lovely pads in the break. Piano does a nice job, it's subtle. Break is taking too long as well now. Here's that melody again, nah needs improvement imo. Work on the climax as well.
Sounds are quite good, but I'm turning it off now, work on the dynamics!

Good luck!
-Jay

Posted by pho mo on Sep-17-2004 05:37:

The reverb kick at 3:49, if the tail on that thing lasted for 20 seconds I reckon you've got yourself a winner (Just a little rant for ya )
Overall I really liked listening to your tune m8, it is a very nice chilled track, and a lot of things sounds great. There's considerable depth to the tune, pretty good for 5 hours work! As the others said, a bit more dynamics would carry this track a whole lot further.