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Posted by eXrMusic on Sep-18-2004 18:50:

My Christian rap song

Being the devoted Christian that I am, I decided stray away from the norm of what I produce and create a Christian rap tune. Both the music and vocals are performed by myself and I think it turned out pretty well.

Any kind of feedback is appreciated.

Stephen MacKell - Pray

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Sep-18-2004 19:03:

1) You can't sing
2) You can't rap on beat
3) Don't use MIDI's as your backing music

If I were God and heard this I'd send a lightning your way right about now.

Posted by Sunquest on Sep-18-2004 19:06:

Posted by Massive84 on Sep-18-2004 20:50:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
1) You can't sing
2) You can't rap on beat
3) Don't use MIDI's as your backing music

If I were God and heard this I'd send a lightning your way right about now.

sorry, but this is fucking funny!

Posted by Andy C on Sep-18-2004 21:19:

this is a pisstake surely?

and whats it doing on this forum??? lol

uve got balls mate ill give you that

Posted by Blincc on Sep-18-2004 21:48:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
1) You can't sing

sry, but it's true

production itself is very simple but apart from that i really love the lyrics, guess they're the most important thing in this track

gbu & keep trying mate!

Posted by noikeee on Sep-18-2004 21:59:

all in all i've got to say you're one of the finest trolls we've had lately. i salute you.

Posted by Tranc3 on Sep-18-2004 23:12:

Umm......you aren't serious about this are you?

Posted by en2t on Sep-18-2004 23:36:

lol.....

Posted by TweeK on Sep-18-2004 23:58:

Im digging the whole cristian theme,but you cant sing

Keep trying dude

Posted by J.L. on Sep-19-2004 00:02:

exrmusic is a troll.

Posted by Pimp_fu on Sep-19-2004 00:23:

Remember when you were a kid and gave your mom a mudpie for her birthday? Remember what she said, Its the thought that counts.

Posted by mike_stefan69 on Sep-19-2004 00:40:

the person who did this should be shot
pure and simple really

Posted by optik on Sep-19-2004 01:20:

this is what religon does to you - beware

I actually feel sick.

Posted by TranceFantasy2k on Sep-19-2004 03:28:

the beat isn't bad.

your voice sucks, sorry man, vocal lessons do wonders or at least sing in a different key.

And a metromone attached to a stun gun that is up against your crotch could probably help keep you on beat. Rap isn't for you, actually singing isn't either.

good thing god thinks all praise sounds good....

wow, after listening to the whole song, if i were you, i'd get a totally new screen name and start over my tranceaddict membership

Posted by TweeK on Sep-19-2004 03:35:

Cheer up man

Look at were William Hung is now

Posted by R.j. on Sep-19-2004 07:40:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceFantasy2k

wow, after listening to the whole song, if i were you, i'd get a totally new screen name and start over my tranceaddict membership

dun werry man, i suck at rapping too.

Posted by Airyck Sterrett on Sep-19-2004 09:14:

wow, my day just got a whole lot better

Posted by DJ InfraRed on Sep-19-2004 09:59:

Wow. This is probably the worst song I've heard. I'm surprised that u would even try to put this one up. So funny.

Hey U can even try out for American Idol.

And by the way Keep Up the good Work.

Posted by Timothy on Sep-19-2004 11:02:

You are not as talented in singing as you are in composing music. It's a nice track if the vocals are done by someone who can sing.

Posted by websley on Sep-19-2004 11:09:

Start's quite good with the rapping, but the part after that is just awfull. Have you actually THOUGHT of a melody, 'cause it sounds like you actually improvising on that part.
Just one more thing about the rap: Add more background rapping!

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Sep-19-2004 11:15:

quote:
Originally posted by Timothy
You are not as talented in singing as you are in composing music. It's a nice track if the vocals are done by someone who can sing.

The backing music is clearly a MIDI file that he probably didn't even do himself. The vocals don't even match the phrasing of the tune.

Posted by websley on Sep-19-2004 11:18:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
The vocals don't even match the phrasing of the tune.

Like I said, he just improvised on that

Posted by activa on Sep-19-2004 11:39:

hehehehehehe! WTF! im sorry but that is awful

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Sep-19-2004 11:40:

quote:
Originally posted by websley
Like I said, he just improvised on that

That's not an excuse.

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