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Posted by qbase on Sep-28-2004 17:48:

Help Needed !!!!!!!!

here is my track ..
i wanted do know how do you like it and maby u tell me whats wrong .
http://s3.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=C...64E903A906B6ACD

Posted by a.m. on Sep-28-2004 20:51:

Not bad. I think you need to bring in more percussive elements besides bd, hihat, and snare. The beat gets pretty redundant after a while. Also, I don't really care for the way the BD sounds, but that is a matter of taste. The snare needs to be crisper, IMO.

Unfortunately, the melody sounds extremely similar to: Tukan - Light a Rainbow. If I were you, I would totally rewrite this. The sounds you are using for the melody aren't too bad.

Overall, I think this track needs a a lot of work. Don't get discouraged. As a producer, you show potential. Just keep writing and you'll get better and better.

Peace

Posted by M1cro5lave on Sep-28-2004 21:24:

Where's the sound?
You need to fill up the empty spaces, it sounds very thin, takes away all the interest imo.

I think you have focused too much on the melody and the lead, maybe try focus on the kicks/perc/effects? It will bring much more to the track with some thick sound.
I don't really like the bassline, I didn't really notice it that well

Never give up, this one ain't finished yet, needs more work. But I believe you can do it