hmb - obtainia's mosaic [full 160kbit]

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Posted by capricorn15 on Oct-10-2004 08:35:

hmb - obtainia's mosaic [full 160kbit]

hey guys, been working on this tune all day since the morning. its a breakbeat tune, let me know what you think

right click save as

http://technickz.com/hadi/hmb%20-%2...20(mix%203).mp3

Posted by DjSimonB on Oct-10-2004 15:36:

I like the feel you've got going on there, but some of the perc just sounds so.. .standard, for lack of a better word, it doesn't really fit with the tune. That snare drum in particular, I really don't like it (although I don't know anything about producing breaks, so i can't really help you out with what to use).

It all just goes on a bit, apart from that melody that comes in halfway there aren't really any big changes to it.

Sounds very amateurish, I'm guessing you've not been producing long, so all I can say is just keep at it...

Posted by Massive84 on Oct-11-2004 19:06:

start has nice atmosphere, not sure how to describe it, not happy, not dark, not dreamy....sanctuary.

Choirs are nice in the break, really cool.

That piano? lead is kinda to present , but it sounds cool when the breaks kick back in.

I don't think it sound that amateurish at all, but i do think you have to add more fx en something extra in the intro, to give it more atmosphere and keep it intresting.

Posted by capricorn15 on Oct-12-2004 09:20:

thansk for the comments guys, really appreciate it =)

Posted by Thunder5 on Oct-12-2004 09:25:

Hmm..

The link doesn't seem to work for me atleast...

Get only this 33kb html file..

Posted by capricorn15 on Oct-12-2004 09:29:

quote:
Originally posted by Thunder5
Hmm..

The link doesn't seem to work for me atleast...

Get only this 33kb html file..

hmm, it should work, i updated it with a new file, just some gated choir pads, it should work, make sure to right click and save target as =) thanks

Posted by Thunder5 on Oct-12-2004 09:39:

quote:
Originally posted by hadi ******
hmm, it should work, i updated it with a new file, just some gated choir pads, it should work, make sure to right click and save target as =) thanks

Got it working, though had to do it other way.. copied the link and changed the %20 with spaces... A little tip for the future, please do not use spaces in filenames, replace them with _

Listening now...

Quite nice atmosphere you've got there... Very chill and laid back.
A little more percussion wouldn't hurt. And maybe change that snare.

REALLY like this middle part, very dream like.

-Matti-

Posted by capricorn15 on Oct-12-2004 09:50:

quote:
Originally posted by Thunder5
Got it working, though had to do it other way.. copied the link and changed the %20 with spaces... A little tip for the future, please do not use spaces in filenames, replace them with _

Listening now...

Quite nice atmosphere you've got there... Very chill and laid back.
A little more percussion wouldn't hurt. And maybe change that snare.

REALLY like this middle part, very dream like.

-Matti-

thanks, greatly apperciated, thanks for the tip on the naming too, ill do that proper next time

Posted by sigmanova on Oct-13-2004 23:23:

pretty decent laid-back tune...not sure how to improve this, but i am a bit turned off by the snare. i think if it was shortened a bit it would fit in more nicely. doesn't compare to your earlier work imho but overall nice effort.

Posted by extalin on Oct-15-2004 14:04:

very original as always hadi

i would use a softer kick (with a good bit more lows and without a harsh high attack part.. or a greatly reduced one anyway). the snare is fine with me though. i like the percussion, especially the panning.

the sub bass sounds kinda dissonant, but i remember you telling me about the CRS knob thing on one of the osciallators, so i'm sure that's why.. but i feel like it adds tension to it and IMO a more harmonic bass would do wonders for this tune because it's really a relaxing type of song and usually consonance is associated with relaxation as opposed to dissonance.

anyway, keep it up hadi. i am interested to hear what you come up with next

Posted by dramin on Oct-19-2004 05:23:

very original indeed.

I like the drums alot for some reason. and it is definately chill. I DL this cuz of extalin giving me previous projects by you. I really like tranceairwaves and loneley road(i think thats what you named it)

keep up the good work bro, ill be waiting for more