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-- [PROG TRANCE/HOUSE] euler - clamour *update
[PROG TRANCE/HOUSE] euler - clamour *update
I updated this track, which I posted about 2 weeks ago. I added a new bassline and some small new elements, also a synth bassline at the end. It is still the very raw version, so the stuctures and transitions need work.
I'm still a n00b at mastering, so it probably sounds pretty bad. I don't really know how to work the damn compressors.
Any comments?
Name: Clamour
Length: 7:51
Quality: 256 kbps
Genre: Prog. Trance/House
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Thanks for listening! 
ur not too newb in mastering
the kick is very clear
might be a little too loud even
very unique track, i like it, no suggestions from here
could use some vocals maybe 
really good work
keep it up
pece out
First off, good that you made it slower 
Bassline is perfect as it is, I'd leave it as it is
Hmm maybe use more of that Satoshi-sounding tom that starts at 0'30''
And bring the guitar back in sooner
Hmm maybe make the outro a little bit longer so that it's easier to mix out of...
You're nearly there, but it's great already 
Thanks for replies...
What do you mean use more of the tom? Like the syncopation that it plays change over?
I am going to leave the main bassline as it is. My friend liked the synth-bassline in the end, and I'm working on that now. I think it can be made to fit with the first bassline pretty well, since they are in pretty much different frequency ranges.
About the guitar, do you mean have it come in earlier, or return earlier?
I do plan to make the outro longer, I was just in a haste to render it this time.
I want to work more on the buildups, as I think they need more energy and suspense...
Any more suggestions?
THis has a nice kick and bass.
very unique hihat, nice background sounds.
takes a while before the theme kicks in.
everything is really nice eqed.
Missing a clap in the beat, doesn't need to be a hard or loud one.
the melody with the string sequence later on is really nice.
Curious where did you get all these nice background fx/sounds?
good track.
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| Originally posted by eulerfx What do you mean use more of the tom? Like the syncopation that it plays change over? |
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| About the guitar, do you mean have it come in earlier, or return earlier? |
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| Any more suggestions? |
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| Originally posted by Massive84 THis has a nice kick and bass. very unique hihat, nice background sounds. takes a while before the theme kicks in. everything is really nice eqed. Missing a clap in the beat, doesn't need to be a hard or loud one. the melody with the string sequence later on is really nice. Curious where did you get all these nice background fx/sounds? good track. |
All you need is to lower that kick drum and then i'd play it
Ben! www.dj-ben.co.uk [email protected]
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| Originally posted by DJ-BEN All you need is to lower that kick drum and then i'd play it Ben! www.dj-ben.co.uk [email protected] |
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| Originally posted by eulerfx ill email you when i get this thing polished up... |
Pretty damn nice, I like the moody feel and the sample from PMT - Gyromancer 
Would prefer if the strings had a more 'joined' feel, by that I mean some of the shorter notes the strings play sound a tad out of place for mine, but I like 
Great bassline and overall rhythm, nice use of percs generally too.
Sounds great at 3:28 when it all comes back in, love the way the toms lead it in as well.
Melody from 4:26 sounds good but is a little plain, it does sound nice however when the strings come in, as they add much-needed complexity.
Overall this is really nice work!
Hmm, excellent track guy, I love the bassline (remind me Perfect Wave) and the atmosphere !
The percs can be improved, add some congas or bongos and a medium open hat and your track will be really deep and floorkiller !
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