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Posted by TranceSpeeder on Oct-19-2004 22:57:

what you think?

http://www.electronica-central.com/Nick/Nick_Synth1.mp3

Posted by Dj Pyster on Oct-19-2004 23:25:

It's too slow, sounds nice though, but maybe some layering on the synth would be a little nice.

Posted by Tranc3 on Oct-19-2004 23:44:

Before I answer, what exactly is it that you were going for? It helps to have a point of reference when critiquing work.

Posted by TranceSpeeder on Oct-20-2004 00:10:

i was going for an uplifting melody with a nice buildup in the end, i know it needs work but some comments would be nice.

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Oct-20-2004 01:26:

Yeah, it's waaay too slow. There are some timing errors in there too, making it sound very clumsy.

Your reverb settings are quite weird too, sounds like it was recorded in an empty hall.

I don't suppose you could put the midi (or RNS if this is Reason work) of this up? I'd like to try out something if you don't mind.

Posted by Tranc3 on Oct-20-2004 03:48:

Yes in that case it's far too slow, and as Mr. Mystery said there are timing errors. If it was intentional, then you should make the errors more prominent to really fuck with the listener, otherwise fix it.

Posted by DJ-Igloo on Oct-20-2004 05:27:

deff needs to sped up big time and reverb needs to be cute down big time try adding more delay insted of delay

Posted by djxtension on Oct-20-2004 10:32:

Ok, here we go:

- Too slow (speed it up, as said)
- Reverb sounds to 'icey' and dry, needs to be a bit warmer (try eq-ing out some of the highs and adding a bit more low, or make it shorter)
- Timing is not right, some notes just seem to fall out of place
- A bit of delay would do nice, gives a bit more of a 'spacy' feel

Overall, it is a nice sounding synth, just needs some tweaking here and there.

Posted by hardikaveri on Oct-20-2004 11:39:

LOL tranceSPEEDER with too SLOW melody

Posted by Danne__85 on Oct-20-2004 12:45:

As people have said: Too slow and the timing is wrong.

I took your melody and made my own version of it. Hope you don't mind.

Sample: http://www.lnctv.com/~a41154a/samples/melody.mp3

Changes:

- Tempo changed to 138 bpm.
- Added a few notes.
- Added delay
- Fixed the timing.

Hope you'll like it.

Posted by TranceSpeeder on Oct-20-2004 17:52:

hey thats kewl! can i have the file for that?

Posted by Danne__85 on Oct-20-2004 18:27:

What program are you using?

Posted by TranceSpeeder on Oct-20-2004 19:16:

fruityloops studio

Posted by Danne__85 on Oct-20-2004 19:21:

Okey, I don't use FruityLoops, but I have the midi for the changed notes.

Midi: http://www.lnctv.com/~a41154a/samples/melody.mid

Posted by nytrox on Oct-20-2004 22:44:

Hey Danne__85 - thats beautiful!

Posted by hardikaveri on Oct-21-2004 05:14:

hey i would say "a little" improvement man!!

Posted by Danne__85 on Oct-21-2004 06:52:

Hehe, thanks guys.