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Posted by D-Element on Oct-20-2004 03:24:

Far Sight ( New Trance Song )

Hi all im here to present you my last piece of work. It,s a stream/trance-like song and i wuold like to know your opinion about this song.. it's very important for me to improove what is not good in my next song.

thx

here is the link to listen to my song
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=437378&T=5472

ok it's on Acidplanet and you need to registrer to download the song but just click for listening to it for the moment im going to try to upload the song somewhere on the web asap

enjoy

Posted by pho mo on Oct-20-2004 04:01:

As you said in your blurb on acid planet about this tune, you've concentrated on the production quality, and it really shows!

First up the percussion is mixed beautifully, there are lots of really nice touches, reverse kicks etc. work really well. Percussion filtering up at around 2:00 works brilliantly too. Overall the kick I think is a little bit weak, it could use a bit more low frequency oomph.

Synth-wise the filtering from 3:02 - 3:15 then coming in with the choir is simply beautiful. Breakbeat thereafter sounds great, lots of people try it and fail, you've pulled it off really well.

I love the hissiness of the strings around 4:50 but these could perhaps be EQ'd a little bit higher, perhaps slightly more on the tone and less noise? Maybe then they'd just sound harsh, dunno.

Tune-wise I like the laid back feel, the xylophone is cool, the lazy acid melody is great and there's heaps of interest throughout.

Anyway really good work m8! I've definitely got time for this tune because it's fantastic work, really inspirational production-wise - I think you've done an amazing job here!

Posted by Zombie0729 on Oct-20-2004 05:52:

take that reverse percussion around 45sec or wherever the closest phrase is and add some low to the kick.

The bassline is nice, did you change the levels after that first minor breakdown?

i'm not sure i agree w/ that extra hi-hat around 2:48, i'm sure you were probably debating yourself.

the breakbeat is really well done

overall, i like it

Posted by D-Element on Oct-20-2004 11:03:

Yeah thx Pho and Anthony. nice feedback you two and yeah sometime it's hard to work with FlStudio to put all the thing correctly

will try to improve that in my next song