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Posted by Orange Project on Nov-10-2004 21:55:

Orange Project - The new world

This tune isnt finshed jet. To finish it I need some feedback, please criticize anything u dont like tell me which parts u like I will really much appreciate it.

Cheers

here

Posted by Sunquest on Nov-10-2004 23:08:

hey m8 , i wonder if ur the guy hosting the tiesto party in december hmmmmmmz

anyways, about ur track, kick needs stronger, could use a little more reverby effect on ur synths and percs, i think your bass is off note to the melody as well hehe
structure is not bad,
keep working on ur mastering and the notes, make sure theyre not off note
play around a little more
g'luck
peace out

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 00:38:

Thank you for the comments. I hadnt noticed about the off-key, cheers for that.

About the tiesto thingy, yes it is me and a couple of collegues who are bringing tiesto to Mexico at the end of december hopefully for NYE if thats what you mean!

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 02:06:

The track has been updated.

Posted by RickyM on Nov-11-2004 09:47:

Hey Orange Project

To me the bass sounds off key from the tune - it sounds fine for the first two parts - and then goes off key on the 3rd note change. I like the synth though. If you change the bass then you will have a nice song. Also - the hard synth at the very start is great - but is at the wrong note as well.

Rick

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 15:28:

quote:
Originally posted by RickyM
Hey Orange Project

To me the bass sounds off key from the tune - it sounds fine for the first two parts - and then goes off key on the 3rd note change. I like the synth though. If you change the bass then you will have a nice song. Also - the hard synth at the very start is great - but is at the wrong note as well.

Rick

working on it!

Posted by RickyM on Nov-11-2004 16:49:

Good stuff - feel free to tear my next song apart when I upload it!

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 17:06:

Does it sound better now?

Posted by RickyM on Nov-11-2004 17:11:

Still bass sounds off key - ill tell you what I mean

Listen to your tune from 1.10 it sounds fine until 1.16/1.17 when the bass goes off key.

Maybe its just my F*cked up ears???

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 17:20:

I know what u mean now, Ill try to fix it. Thanks for your help!

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 18:56:

I think Ive fixed it now (I hope). Have u uploaded ur tune?

Posted by moolow on Nov-11-2004 20:01:

Like the melodies a lot.
Maybe u could add a new bassline in it. Otherwise. Great track!

Posted by RickyM on Nov-11-2004 22:02:

Hey ORange again!

To me youve definietly improved it but the bass still sounds a wee bit off to me in one part....sorry . Definitly addictive tune though.

If you click the link below my signature you can hear my latest track Orange - Ocean Depths.

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 23:16:

quote:
Originally posted by moolow
Like the melodies a lot.
Maybe u could add a new bassline in it. Otherwise. Great track!

ur track is geat also. U have to pass the tip on how to make that main forcefull electro sound.

How would u fix the bassline, is it still out of key?

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-11-2004 23:44:

quote:
Originally posted by RickyM
Hey ORange again!

To me youve definietly improved it but the bass still sounds a wee bit off to me in one part....sorry . Definitly addictive tune though.

If you click the link below my signature you can hear my latest track Orange - Ocean Depths.

I think I know what you mean, Is it the very last part of every bar or more?

About ur tune?
I love the ambient part at the begining, I have always found that so difficult to make. I also love the way ur synthbounces with the beat. and ur double clap is spot on. Maybe u should add another melody a on the top a tiny bit lower pitched. Ur baseline is on key
Ur tune is very very cool!!

Posted by JoeyEnv on Nov-12-2004 00:22:

I like this tune OP. Very clean synths an decent percussion. Perhaps its a wee bit repetitive though, I think you should try to variate a few more melodies an try to improve the atmosphere with greater reeverb. Apart from that, pretty good quality.

--joey

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-12-2004 03:40:

I think ive fixed it. If I havent then i have a really shit ear!

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-12-2004 03:42:

quote:
Originally posted by JoeyEnv
I like this tune OP. Very clean synths an decent percussion. Perhaps its a wee bit repetitive though, I think you should try to variate a few more melodies an try to improve the atmosphere with greater reeverb. Apart from that, pretty good quality.

--joey

Cheers man!
I agree with you fully, I shall put a bit more depth to the melody but I need to get the keys right. You mean reverb on the main melody or overall?

Posted by RickyM on Nov-12-2004 14:09:

Result - it's on key!!!!!

Posted by JoeyEnv on Nov-12-2004 15:00:

Overall. I think it needs to be more atmospheric but, of course, it's only my opinion.

--joey

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-12-2004 16:38:

quote:
Originally posted by RickyM
Result - it's on key!!!!!

Finally!!! Thanks for the help Ricky!

How can I make it more atmospheric?