Subtle - Maranjana "NEW TRACK *sample* 1.7 MB"

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Posted by Subtle on Nov-11-2004 14:15:

Subtle - Maranjana "NEW TRACK *sample* 1.7 MB"

ok, so I am almost finished with my new track, kind of progressive trance.. 128 BMP

Subtle - Maranjana

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Subtle - Maranja (sample) (right click dl)

Posted by JoeyEnv on Nov-11-2004 20:01:

Very dark intro. I think the strings could be richer ... break is immense, bass is deep and pretty atmospheric. Then ... it stopped. I think you should upload a sample over 2 minutes because you'd most likely get much more feedback. Pretty good though from what I can hear.

--joey

Posted by Timothy on Nov-12-2004 10:23:

The chord progression and percussions are very nice. You should try finishing this

Posted by Mycron on Nov-14-2004 01:39:

i like this one, mate

i like the break, and same goes for the atmosphere, the percussions are ok, you should only work on the melodies a bit,

keep it up, mate

Posted by thoughtlessjex on Nov-14-2004 05:36:

When I first looked at the title for this track, I thought it said "Marijuana." This is probably a sign that I need to be getting more rest.

It's not bad. The pad seems kind of flat, if you ask me. There wasn't much more to go on, really. I like what you've got going, though.

Posted by pho mo on Nov-15-2004 03:05:

Nice mood here, good melody. Not much to go on because of the short sample. I found the open hat panned full-right to be slightly odd, but then i'm listening in headphones so it probably doesn't matter. The pads and the main melody synth are a little flat, you can do some work on them to make them more interesting. I am looking forward to hearing the full version, as it sounds like you can make this track really beautiful

Posted by Subtle on Nov-15-2004 07:05:

thx, I will definitely try working out something with those pads, and leads, and that open hi hat probably needs more centre..

and Jax: u need a little rest man

Posted by alexpea on Nov-15-2004 11:42:

this one is very deeo/emotional... Although I think the soundquality is rather muddy.. The track needs more high freq.

Posted by kopi_luwak on Nov-15-2004 16:39:

Hey nice chords in the intro,the pads sounds kinda weak maybe they would sound better a bit fatters?at 1.00 turns really wicked,waiting for the finishe thang .
Kopi =o.

Posted by Mane on Nov-15-2004 16:40:

very good pads, melodie is quiet good but whole track lack of energy you should add something to make it but except that its ok

Posted by Klangzentrum on Nov-15-2004 16:48:

*listening*

yeah, i agree about the chord-progression and synths...very nice...although the pad could be less "sawy", imo!
and it needs some more elements in the break, to make it sound more interesting...add some fx...

but i�m sure you�ll get a very nice result, when it�s finished! good luck, mate!

Posted by Subtle on Nov-15-2004 17:32:

thx alot for the feedback guys.. I am at the moment struggling to fill up the empty parts in the breakdown..