Subtle Signs - Stabbed Twice / Untitled

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Posted by Teknikol on Nov-11-2004 21:13:

Subtle Signs - Stabbed Twice / Untitled

Hi there guys,

I've been busy for some time now, and here's the result. This first one is a finished track. Maybe you can give some feedback. It's a 192kbps cut.

Stabbed Twice (long cut)

The next one is a project I recently started, it's not finished just an impression of what I got right now. I'm quite satisfied with the overall sound, sounds kinda clear to me The string/pad that comes in @ 1:14 is kinda cheap, need to work on that. Maybe you can give some feedback on this one too, I would appreciate it.

Untitled (sample)

greetz,

Ram�n

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-12-2004 00:05:

The kick and the clap are crap, specially the clap deffo change them. The synths and airy sound are very cool indeed. Make the melody more prominent. There is a moment when the melody goes and u leave a beat with some sound, u should fill that with more sounds and dont let the tune decay so early keep it flowing with the beat, use it is a very good beat indeed but u stop it too early.

Posted by Subtle on Nov-12-2004 00:51:

ok, Subtle Signs.. thought I`d stop by and listen to what the other half of me is doing :P

Plus
like the percussions
synths are cool too
good sound

minus
bass is kinda.. dunno.. unremarkable!
2 first minutes sounds too much the same
too little happening in the break
after the break nothing happens, except for a string.. and some minor percussive stuff (good idea about the string)
u need to let all this happen in a shorter amount of time

hope it helps

Posted by Teknikol on Nov-13-2004 11:24:

Thanks for the comments so far, pretty useful tips you guys gave