Krivi - Innominato [Trance] 224kbps |

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Posted by krivi on Nov-12-2004 01:34:

Krivi - Innominato [Trance] 224kbps |

please leave feedback on my new tune :

Krivi - Innominato

am just courious if this track could be released?is it good enough?what is wrong and what to improve?

respect

Posted by Subtle on Nov-12-2004 02:03:

plus
really nice bassline (clean)
percussions sounds nice

minus
FX are too obvious.. hide them more
the synth that comes in around 3:00 mark is too bright and high end sounding imo..
too little happening here, Im passing 5 min.. (and all there was a bassline percussion and a bad sounding synth..
the main lead sux

conclusion
The bassline sounds really nice and firm, so does the kickdrum, the FX arent especially good... kind of annoying.. the first synth isnt very good at all.. in fact no synths arent any good at all... please lose those FX.. but the bassline sounds GREAT!!! what did u use to make that?

sorry man... this track would never see the light

Posted by krivi on Nov-12-2004 02:10:

i just use ts303 in fruity

Posted by newwave on Nov-12-2004 02:28:

After that one, well ... I've decided it's a good idea to actively write the review as I listen to the song

The first thing I noticed, to second what Subtle said, is the fx are too obvious. It almost makes them sound like an accident.

I'm at 1:42 and I really like what just happened. I think you should swap what you build up with to what just got added to give it that subtle (hehe), progressive drama.

During the first break, drop the kick or move it closer to the begining of the break, it sounds off. Again, in the middle of the break, the fx are waaay to much in the front when they could be used through out the break sparingly to add tension.

Oddly enough, while I was writing the last line about the spell checker, I jumped back to winamp to see what the time was at to let ya know that something else should be happening. Welp, five minutes into it and the song still doesn't have a solid direction, lead, or hook.

Don't get me wrong, it's not horible and there's definately room for improvment. At this point it's just not uber enough to compete with the mad amounts of trance being released out there with the same sound.

Ahh ... I love what happened at 7:30ish! Totally wasn't expecting it but it sounded good, so why's it at the end? Finally, the drop at the end is way too abrupt for my personal mixing style, but I don't generally spin this type of trance.

I want a damn spell checker for me to use in these forums! :P

Posted by josh rising on Nov-12-2004 04:12:

I think the song is pretty good, I would use it if I spun progressive, but as a filler track. Nothing really stands out. It sounds very clean to me tho, and the bassline at the beginning is bangin. The synth at first sounds a little like Rank 1 shit but then kinda gets worse. But overall its pretty good! I love the pads.

Posted by krivi on Nov-12-2004 22:08:

i figured out that track is shit.
thanks on comments