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Posted by craig800 on Nov-12-2004 07:31:

new tune plz review 192 kbps

Hey there

i made this song a while back and posted it here.. got some good feedback but decided it wasent finished. I came back to it last night an pretty much totally revamped it. Its got a stronger kick and better percs with some more sub-melodies.

Please check it out:

http://host50.hrwebservices.net/~tr..._me_a_name).mp3

*right hand click save target as.

All comments welcome oh and please help me come up with a name thanx

Posted by Zoik on Nov-12-2004 07:41:

You already know how I feel about this, Craig.. but I'll just tell everyone else what I think of it anyway .
Firstly, there's been a huge improvement in terms of sound quality. The kick is actually audible now! And I like that you added more sub-melodies, too.
I often find myself becoming impatient with tracks that have a generic and monotone buildup, but not with this!

Keep it up!!

Posted by craig800 on Nov-12-2004 07:46:

thanks very much altan much appreciated. Any ideas for a name?

Posted by Orange Project on Nov-12-2004 07:58:

It starts very well. There are some tiny high pitched sounds at the over the tune that I dont like. I LOVE!!! the change on the baseline. The breakdown could be a bit more interesting and work on a more interesting drum roll.

Posted by craig800 on Nov-12-2004 08:59:

hey thanks for the commment that bit i put in the clip isnt actually the breakdown i probably should have mentioned that when i posted it!

thanks again!

Posted by davidemonin on Nov-12-2004 10:53:

This is a really nice tune. Sending you a PM.

Posted by craig800 on Nov-12-2004 11:58:

thanks for the comment .. got the pm

Posted by JoeyEnv on Nov-12-2004 14:57:

In one word ... awesome. Only fault I have is the bass, kinda hard for me to hear the change because it is a wee bit too low imo. Other than that, you're good to go.

--joey

Posted by craig800 on Nov-12-2004 20:44:

thanks joey yeah ive had a couple of comments that the bass is a bit hard to hear so ill get right on it

Posted by Andy Sevil on Nov-13-2004 04:22:

This is great mate!!, really enjoyed the sample you sent me -- gets me in the mood for some deep melodic trance! Keep it up!!

Cheers.

Posted by craig800 on Nov-13-2004 05:09:

thanks andy! anyone else wanna take a listen?

Posted by trance-ecj on Nov-13-2004 05:28:

im really bad with naming stuff

but io thought some good words to use might be timeless or passage...perhaps

Posted by pho mo on Nov-15-2004 02:25:

Hi m8! fellow aussie producer I hope you're going to enter this into the Trance Tribe Recordings production comp!

The production for your as yet untitled tune is really sweet, the sound is full and clear; there's some really beautiful high frequency fx going on all the time that adds a really nice sheen. I really like the eqing on the percs, they sound just right.

Do fix that bass up a little, it is a tad too soft. The chord change is definitely sweet; perhaps you like it to be subtle, I'd suggest adding some little fx that leads your ears into the change.

Nice tune mate!

Posted by craig800 on Nov-15-2004 05:30:

thanks! really appreaciate the comment. Ive never heard of that trance tribe competition .. tell me more!

Posted by pho mo on Nov-15-2004 06:02:

quote:
Originally posted by craig800
thanks! really appreaciate the comment. Ive never heard of that trance tribe competition .. tell me more!

Here ya go, a production competition from our very own trance label in Australia! link

Posted by craig800 on Nov-15-2004 09:31:

i think i just might enter this.. thanks for the link!

Posted by alexpea on Nov-15-2004 13:26:

Wow, the downloading-speed is sloooooow...
But the track is good. Nice FXs and stuff all the way here man! Laidback trance. Very easy to listen to. But seriously, turn up the bass!!

Posted by kopi_luwak on Nov-15-2004 16:16:

Hey man this is really soft,the only thing that did not like me very much was the synth at 1.33,is too loud in my opinion and to low-F,waiting to hear the finished version .
Kopi =o.

Posted by Mane on Nov-15-2004 16:36:

i really like melodies and fx's , sound of melodie is great i really like something like that overall very good track keep it up

Posted by craig800 on Nov-15-2004 20:00:

thanks for all the comments. Im going to upload the full one soon

Posted by nickmahoney on Nov-16-2004 03:05:

good sample, gimme gimme gimme a full clip and a title....

Posted by thoughtlessjex on Nov-16-2004 04:22:

Pretty cool so far. I like the way you've used the piano.

The bass seems kinda muddy. I can't really tell what people are talking about when they say it changes.

I like your FX.

Posted by craig800 on Nov-16-2004 05:15:

thanks nick illget a full version to you soon.

and thoughtlessjex yeah i know what you mean with the muddy bass but im not quite sure what you mean by the piano? i didnt use any piano..

Posted by Beyer on Nov-16-2004 13:44:

Awesome track.. Excellent work

Posted by thoughtlessjex on Nov-16-2004 16:50:

quote:
im not quite sure what you mean by the piano? i didnt use any piano..

Oh, really? There's something really driving in the background in the mid-range that sounds like a house style piano riff. Whatever that is, it's cool.