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Posted by Mycron on Nov-13-2004 23:42:

Peter Safranyos - Untitled 2

hey mates,

i just would like to show you my new track, which hasn't got a name yet, anyway, i hope you will like this one,

[link removed, sorry]

comments, suggestions always appreciated,

thanks for listening to my music,

Peter

Posted by DjCommisad on Nov-14-2004 00:00:

i think this is the one from msn???

i really can't give an honest answer atm, i can't even hear very well, i have the flu (plus sinus cold, or whatever).

i love the melody, etc. sounds like it could use a bit more oomph on the low end, but that's a norm for u pete

get working on eternal bliss 2 u nut!

Posted by davidemonin on Nov-14-2004 00:00:

Well a another nice melodic tune from you Peter. Can't wait to hear the final "full" version.

Posted by Thunder5 on Nov-14-2004 00:21:

Really nice melody.

Definedly could have some more low end.

And maybe some more percussion.

Posted by teknasia on Nov-14-2004 00:40:

woow! sounds really nice!

I like the bassline and the choir!

maybe you can add some more percussion to fill things up.

wow, piano! and a saw kinded synth :d

damn damn damn nice

maybe you could replace the main synth with a distorted guitar? just an idea

Posted by M1cro5lave on Nov-14-2004 00:56:

Wow, very full of energy

As always, great atmosphere! Even though not as good as your previous ones.
As mentioned, the low end could use some more.
Great melody, lovely piano

I find it relaxing, yet full of energy. I like it a lot

Keep up the good work!

Posted by DJ Terraplex on Nov-14-2004 01:47:

Hi Pete

Deffo needs more low, its really un-bassy. Nice Piano. its generally good (dislike the closed hats, they sound really out of place) All it needs is more ooomph on the low

cheers

Alex

Posted by fineart on Nov-14-2004 09:17:

Hey Peter,

I don't wanna be critical as usual, but there a few things to rethink about the track, but firstly what I really like about this track:
- it is driving
- pads are great including the choir
- EQing is getting professional
- nice effects overally track, this is what I also should learn how to produce those

What you should rethink:
- The pluck notes, you should work a bit on the melody
- the piano melody

Fineart / Istvan Safranyos

Posted by djrenco on Nov-14-2004 11:59:

hi Pete,
very good track m8, i like the melodies... such as finart says, i don't like the piano... delete it or change the melody of it. i love these choirs! the synths are good.
btw when do you think we can finish our remix

cheers
Renco

Posted by Subtle on Nov-14-2004 13:32:

great percussions, good melody and the mastering sounds fine... the melody isnt my cup of tea.. but productions wise very good..

lose the piano.. quite frankly is sounds horrible on its own.. the break is good.. and I can actually hear ur style mate.. definitely in the same vain as Lost Emotions.. u have gotten more punch in the takeoff.. than u usually got

good work!

8/10

Posted by Icone on Nov-14-2004 16:54:

Sounds good to me mate, I like the overall sound.

I'm not too much for those synths with quite some resonance on it, though that's personal. They sound too 'thin' for me.
I think you can perhaps work a bit more on the melody of the pluck synth, as Steve says.
Bass needs a bit more oomph, try to compress or eq it a bit more and it's done.
Piano is a bit less for the overall sound of the track, I think it might sound just as good if you replace it by something else.

Looking forward to the finished one

Cheers,
Wim

Posted by pho mo on Nov-14-2004 22:07:

Hi mate, another really uplifting tune
The panned hats stand out as being much louder than the rest, with the result of losing some low-end and burying the melody a little. I can hardly hear the bassline.
The tune sounds really great and the vibe is excellent; a little attention to the mixing should make this one sound really sweet.

Posted by sooper on Nov-15-2004 00:25:

Hey Petey!

This is a pretty sweet uplifting tune! Very driving indeed.

I love the melodies, though I'm not too sure the piano fits very well - its not as flowing as the rest of the song. Hope that makes sense!

Looking forward to hearing the final product - keep up the fine work,
Trev

Posted by Sunquest on Nov-15-2004 04:06:

quality rocks m8
just the melody u got, i think its a little all over the place, like the notes arent too organized, its just going all over the place, i know u can do better with the notes
just concentrate a little more
like the piano notes are just like , u can do wayyyyy better
keep it at it m8
waiting for next track

Posted by Mycron on Nov-15-2004 19:31:

thanks guys, for the comments

i'm going to rework the main synth melody aswell as the piano melody,

cheers,

Peter

Posted by Mane on Nov-15-2004 19:41:

great pads but piano could be a lot better, add some effects and put maybe octave higher? really like whole atmosphere and melodies are very good, overall great track i enjoyed it keep it up

Posted by Minhaj on Nov-17-2004 23:17:

hey man
this is a really good track
cant wait to hear the whole thing.