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Posted by Dj_Underwater on Nov-14-2004 16:33:

KarateKid Underwater - The Deep Field

Hello people,i've just done my newest track,it's a bit different of all my tracks,let me know what u think about this.All feedbacks are welcome.

Enjoy it !!!!

�ukasz

-------> Download HERE <----------


Posted by Massive84 on Nov-14-2004 17:06:

sounds very energetic.

0.56 same fx as waterplanet almost.

hmm it is 160, but everything sounds so lofi, especially the percussion.

So far a nice intro imo.

break is really nice, awesome.

hmm i can't hear the melody , it sounds very drowned.

ya the mix needs some work mate.

Hope to hear a better version soon ,liking the beat hehe.


Posted by retiro on Nov-14-2004 17:15:

Love this man! Very 'Above & Beyond' style - no mean feat though! Less melodic than your usual stuff but great none-the-less! Don't think the 160 compressed mp3 does the tune much justice! Solid production with no faults apart from an intro melody wouldn't go a miss! You gonna post up the full tune or will I have to wait until its on plastic?


Posted by staticblue on Nov-14-2004 17:24:

this is AWESOME, you just have to mix it now


Posted by Dj_Underwater on Nov-14-2004 17:25:

Oh man i wish i have it on plastic,labels where are ya :P,anyway thx for replies


Posted by cybernetica on Nov-14-2004 17:42:

Sounds indeed very "deep", I like that ... but in contrast to the muffled leadsynths your percussion is way too dominant.
Excellent synths, the pads create a real underwater atmosphere, keep it up


Posted by retiro on Nov-14-2004 17:44:

Poxy labels sort ya lives out - there is talent here on your doorstep! get him will ya!


Posted by kopi_luwak on Nov-14-2004 17:53:

WOW this is really nice man I dont have nothing more to say than this track is great broda .
Kopi =o.


Posted by dEEkAy on Nov-14-2004 17:53:

as said in a different forum

It's lacking a little of a leadsound or so but else I'm glad to see you finally got a kickin percussion runnin up there


Posted by Dj_Underwater on Nov-14-2004 18:10:

Oh i'll have to fix it then,but dunno how


Posted by Subtle on Nov-14-2004 19:15:

plus
pads in break sounds nice


minus
sounds very lo fi
lead sound muddy
bass muddy
muddy
the beat is really boring
sound very cliche`ish

conclusion
this track sounds very Anjuna`ish.. which isnt a good thing.. it really sounds like its made with Reason (another app would surprice me) i dont like the way u drown everything with the melody in the build up part.. the chord progression is inda boring.. sounds very ASOT as well, those pads in the break is the only thing i liked about it...

hope it helps!


Posted by cjart on Nov-14-2004 19:25:

you know my opinion mate :P

keep workin'


Posted by dEEkAy on Nov-14-2004 19:37:

quote:
Originally posted by Subtle
sounds very ASOT as well,


if it sounded ASOT i'd have said "sux, start from scratch"


Posted by kopi_luwak on Nov-14-2004 20:09:

quote:
Originally posted by Subtle
plus
pads in break sounds nice
LOL it's my idea or this guy gives the same opinion to all?
Kopi =o.

minus
sounds very lo fi
lead sound muddy
bass muddy
muddy
the beat is really boring
sound very cliche`ish

conclusion
this track sounds very Anjuna`ish.. which isnt a good thing.. it really sounds like its made with Reason (another app would surprice me) i dont like the way u drown everything with the melody in the build up part.. the chord progression is inda boring.. sounds very ASOT as well, those pads in the break is the only thing i liked about it...

hope it helps!


Posted by kopi_luwak on Nov-14-2004 20:14:

quote:
Originally posted by Subtle
plus
pads in break sounds nice


minus
sounds very lo fi
lead sound muddy
bass muddy
muddy
the beat is really boring
sound very cliche`ish

conclusion
this track sounds very Anjuna`ish.. which isnt a good thing.. it really sounds like its made with Reason (another app would surprice me) i dont like the way u drown everything with the melody in the build up part.. the chord progression is inda boring.. sounds very ASOT as well, those pads in the break is the only thing i liked about it...

hope it helps!


It's my idea or this guy gives the identycal opinion to all?
Kopi =o.


Posted by Dj_Underwater on Nov-14-2004 20:29:

Im fixing quality will update as soon as i can


Posted by davidemonin on Nov-14-2004 21:04:

wow, amazing tune! Can't wait till you get the final touches done on this beauty. Will surely play this.


Posted by Dj_Underwater on Nov-14-2004 21:44:

Ok link is updated now,dunno why u guys mentonied that is sounding so lofi,maybe my lame encoder is the reason hmm,dunno but anyway try now


Posted by Mane on Nov-14-2004 22:05:

you already know my opinion about your music (its amazing :P) this version is a lot better !! main melodie is great (as usually) but put it a bit louder :P
great job
keep it up


Posted by retiro on Nov-14-2004 22:55:

quote:
Originally posted by Subtle
plus
pads in break sounds nice


minus
sounds very lo fi
lead sound muddy
bass muddy
muddy
the beat is really boring
sound very cliche`ish

conclusion
this track sounds very Anjuna`ish.. which isnt a good thing.. it really sounds like its made with Reason (another app would surprice me) i dont like the way u drown everything with the melody in the build up part.. the chord progression is inda boring.. sounds very ASOT as well, those pads in the break is the only thing i liked about it...

hope it helps!


Much better sound Mr. Underwater... your quality is fab! Some advice regards Subtle... clean your ears out once in a while chap!


Posted by Subtle on Nov-14-2004 23:18:

quote:
Originally posted by retiro
Much better sound Mr. Underwater... your quality is fab! Some advice regards Subtle... clean your ears out once in a while chap!
ok, sorry my bad... I forgot that this tune is flawless, perfectly produced in every way.. and I am really sorry I tried to give mr. Underwater constructive critics so he can make even better tunes.. I`ll stop being honest and lick everyones back instead..


Posted by DJ_Silverstone1 on Nov-14-2004 23:23:

quote:
Originally posted by retiro
Much better sound Mr. Underwater... your quality is fab! Some advice regards Subtle... clean your ears out once in a while chap!








yeah like ya do post those sort of comments


Posted by thoughtlessjex on Nov-15-2004 00:38:

I downloaded this because I like your name

Not too bad, so far. Nice proggy feel.

Four minutes, and I still like it. Very complex. Very trancy.

The main problem with the song is that your bass isn't very well defined. The complexity is also kind of thrown off by a slight lack of clarity. It's nothing too horrid, but it's certainly noticeable.


Posted by pho mo on Nov-15-2004 03:23:

wow, more incredible music from dj underwater! at the risk of people saying i'm "licking your back" so to speak, i don't think there is anyone on these forums at the moment that can get a better sound than you. this song sounds incredible, everything is eq'd to perfection. it is a joy to listen to.

mix-wise i think there is a slight lack of focus, i'd like to see one melodic element have the focus 3:15 onwards; having said that, the effect that you have achieved instead is very dreamy, and very uplifting.

the 4 chords that come in at 1:51 confused me because i thought i was listening to a remix of razorfish; they are very similar.

overall, this tune is an absolute pleasure to listen to. well done mate!


Posted by Sunquest on Nov-15-2004 04:04:

hey m8
it does sound like the style of signum - timelord a little, i think the synths should be more clearer so we can really notice the melody u know?
otherwise gr8 track
waiting for ur first releasee by the way
ok ttyl
peace out


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