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-- Xenocreator - Proboscus........ feedback please.
Xenocreator - Proboscus........ feedback please.
Here is the 2nd song ive done. Have a listen & tell us what you think
PROBOSCUS
Here are a few questions;
-Is this professional or amature?
-Does the song kickass or suck ass??
-rating out of 10 (negatives allowed!)?
-What wrong/good about the song?
cheers. I would love some good & bad feedback. the bader, the betterer!! I can't fix what aint broke you know! 
Wild intro. I'm digging it.
Woah, the bass came in and completely changed the mood of the song. Crazy, yo.
The bass and the kick don't seem to jel some of the time. I'd look into that.
So far, it's pretty simple stuff. Pros tend to get somewhat more complex. This is more along the lines of ambient trance/house.
Overall, I'd give it about a five, partly because of the slight disconnect between the bass and the kick, but mostly because it's about a fifth as long as the average ambient trance/house song should be. Make it longer. 
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| Originally posted by thoughtlessjex Wild intro. I'm digging it. Woah, the bass came in and completely changed the mood of the song. Crazy, yo. The bass and the kick don't seem to jel some of the time. I'd look into that. So far, it's pretty simple stuff. Pros tend to get somewhat more complex. This is more along the lines of ambient trance/house. Overall, I'd give it about a five, partly because of the slight disconnect between the bass and the kick, but mostly because it's about a fifth as long as the average ambient trance/house song should be. Make it longer. |
lol i like the questions u got therre 
let me answer them honestly, but dont take this the wrong way, i can tell ur very amateurish, the track is very very newb ish
volumes are too low, track is too empty, sounds wierd... all i can suggest for u now, is to keep producing, in a bout 2 months or so, (if u dont give up) u will be muuuch better 
trust me
dont be mad at me 
im just tryin to help u out...
ok peace out m8
g'luck
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| Originally posted by Sunquest lol i like the questions u got therre let me answer them honestly, but dont take this the wrong way, i can tell ur very amateurish, the track is very very newb ish volumes are too low, track is too empty, sounds wierd... all i can suggest for u now, is to keep producing, in a bout 2 months or so, (if u dont give up) u will be muuuch better hopefully...dont be mad at me im just tryin to help u out...ok peace out m8 g'luck |
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| Originally posted by Xenocreator_PG_ Sunquest, your teh d00d. Thanks for the feedback! I gotta start somewhere! I need all the feedback I can get. The worse the better! It will drive me harder to make a kickass song & eventually become a pro. (hopefully) -very amature -track empty -sounds weird -Newb sound more feedback would be great! |
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| Originally posted by Sunquest lol hope ur not stabbing ur self right about now |
). I cant kid myself if the music is crap! If people dont like it, I gotta know: that's how i think anyways. Thanks again Sunquest, much appreciated there aint no other place on the net like this!
yeah, pump up the volume...cant hear anything
this one sound (guitar?) is playing to loud for the mix...
you need some more percs and synth and fx to make the track more interesting...make a "journey" out of it... you know what i mean?
i also think some sounds are off...
anyway, it has some good ideas in it...would be cool if you can upload a sample with better volume, so a feedback can be done in a better way...
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