steven dawson - new work (160kbps)

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Posted by dj dawson uk on Dec-01-2004 15:15:

steven dawson - new work (160kbps)

ahh it's been so long since i produced anything..

but here's my new incarnation - new work

steven dawson - new work

everything else i have ever done has sucked in comparison.. however.. i know my percs still suck

im going to be adding in some more counter melodies... but this is its current form

gimme all your criticism please

Steve

Posted by DRM on Dec-01-2004 17:05:

link wont work steve, sort it out

Posted by dj dawson uk on Dec-01-2004 21:25:

for those having problems with the link - heres a new

steven dawson - new work

should work

Posted by DRM on Dec-01-2004 21:47:

tis not bad like steve

percussion as u say is the weak point. There just seems to be a lack of it atm makes and wot is there is very standard fare. Bassline is ok but maybe leave that in as a sub and drop a rolling bassline over the top to give the track more drive. The lead sounds very vanguardy if thats wot it is. Needs a bit of tweaking to give it a cleaner sound. quite like the evil sounding saw bass pad (Y)

decent melody overall too. bit more work and it could come along nicely

Posted by Xenocreator_PG_ on Dec-02-2004 22:28:

Re: steven dawson - new work (160kbps)

quote:
Originally posted by dj dawson uk

everything else i have ever done has sucked in comparison.. however.. i know my percs still suck

im going to be adding in some more counter melodies... but this is its current form

gimme all your criticism please

Steve

0:00 - 1:00 Very long beat intro. Maybe shorten a bit or even remove??

1:30 intersting pads/saw bass 1:40 Sounds good. nice sounds

I like the rythme. very catchy. tappen me feet tune

2:50 beat kicks in. It's all good.

-> 3:59 I thik i was expecting a bit more of a crecendo, but the song seems to windes up pretty fast. maybe add some more pads?

This is a great track. from 1:00 to 3;40 the track kicks ass. I was expecting it to rise up again after the 4;00 min mark but the song finishes up. I want more! it definitely needs those counter melodies.

Its a great track. Cant wait to hear the finished result.