Krivi - Trip to Nemesonia [128kbps] [Trance]

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Posted by krivi on Dec-06-2004 01:38:

Krivi - Trip to Nemesonia [128kbps] [Trance]

I'd like to hear your feedback about my tune:

Krivi - Trip to Nemesonia

I just can't believe that it's so hard to get your feedback,
is there any proposition or rule i broke when posted?

Posted by eulerfx on Dec-06-2004 03:30:

- melody in intro is pretty cool! Sounds like a melody to an old-school video game...
- Snare may need to be a little 'snappier', or louder, or something
- All of the melodies are nicely layered, and it works out pretty good
- The sound overall is one that has been overused
- The whole song needs some good strings or pads in the background.
- The mix itself lacks variation IMO, I do not mean add that typical breakbeat section, but something else...
- I'd like to hear a piano in this one for sure, just playing some simple chords quietly. Get a Piano soundfont and set the cut really low...
- Where are the hi-hats? I hear the 4/4 ones, but it needs more!
- Add some sfx

Posted by Mane on Dec-06-2004 12:21:

Re: Krivi - Trip to Nemesonia [128kbps] [Trance]

quote:
Originally posted by krivi
I just can't believe that it's so hard to get your feedback,
is there any proposition or rule i broke when posted?

yep there is , you have to listen and comment other ppl production too :P i know that by myself :P

Posted by ichiro on Dec-06-2004 15:35:

im at work so cant write a long feedbak sorry.

its good, pretty mellow, goog early set tune to bring things down or up.

production is good. I think the clap sound is fine, it does maybe need to cut through more.

the synth that comes in at 2min ish is wierd - i find it a bit computer-gamy sounding (shinobi?) not bad, just not sure if i like it.

good stuff , keep it up.

Posted by krivi on Dec-07-2004 00:18:

thanx on feedback i will try to add some pads and other stuff to make it better...