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Posted by intelligent77 on Dec-08-2004 07:07:

[review] what you guys think?

Need some quick input.. i have to get this to print asap!!! I spent forever working on this..

starting from scratch.. trash my work.. start again.. etc...

Client needed a phoenix in there and that was the only requirement!

Posted by trunks1022 on Dec-08-2004 07:30:

very impressive josy!

Posted by DeRangedMind on Dec-08-2004 07:42:

that is amazing WOW Josy we need to talk because I am surpised omg but if you have any other Beta's you should have posted them,can't wait to party Friday

Posted by cryo on Dec-08-2004 08:55:

i like

Posted by ludawg23 on Dec-08-2004 09:42:

looks badass, i like it a lot

Posted by euphoria on Dec-08-2004 13:24:

nice

Posted by nerve on Dec-08-2004 13:36:

The NYE on the bottom is kinda harder to read on the left side, but changing the color would just throw it off.

Otherwise its a masterpiece

Posted by vtec junkie on Dec-08-2004 14:47:

Awesome job mom.

Posted by verndogs on Dec-08-2004 18:39:

quote:
Originally posted by nerve
The NYE on the bottom is kinda harder to read on the left side, but changing the color would just throw it off.

+1

Posted by glittergirl on Dec-08-2004 19:53:

nice job!!

Posted by BloodfIower on Dec-08-2004 21:04:

wow nice!!!!

just a few critics

@ the blending of the girl on fire u see a small edge from the border of the pic, located under the s of year�s.

if printed the new year will be even more harder readable, since u work with ps it shouldnt be a big problem to make the typo stand out a lil more

the top looks a lil dead with the only black n lil blue BG and pure white text, a lil eyecatching stuff or some slick details should finalize this flyer!

good luck!

Posted by intelligent77 on Dec-08-2004 21:41:

thanx everyone

BLOODFLOWER THANX.. i was getting so tired my eyes were becoming blurred.. i was starting to loose a bit of focus.. i should have caught that line on the side of the girl..

THANKX A M ILLION!!

and yeah I agree the top could use a little more.. if you people saw the first design.. YOU'D laugh your heads off!

Posted by BloodfIower on Dec-08-2004 21:52:

no thanks for thisone

u ppl dont goof yourselfs always.

u already have a nice sense for composition n typo, just train ur eyes to catch the details

Posted by BloodfIower on Dec-09-2004 21:56:

dont forget to post the update :P

Posted by intelligent77 on Dec-13-2004 04:35:

i ran out of time to get this to the printer.. so here was the final...