[progressive]Space Pirate - Circus del Mar [256kbps, full]

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Posted by R.j. on Dec-18-2004 22:54:

[progressive]Space Pirate - Circus del Mar [256kbps, full]

alright well here's a new one from me. i dont think this is the final version because i want your opinions on whats missing (i know something is to make it sound VERY nice.) or if i need to take down something or anything! feedback is welcome. oh and the melody (if you can hear it) is not mine lol, this is practically a remix of an old old old circus tune.

Here is the link:

Space Pirate - Circus del Mar

thanks
rj / space pirate

Posted by PDM on Dec-19-2004 03:16:

- I like the exotic drums you used.
- The laughing Sound freaks me out, I don't think it should be there.
- Funny Melody, never expected that I would come across a melody like this.

Really Original, I'll give you that, but not my cup of tea.

Posted by R.j. on Dec-19-2004 04:53:

quote:
Originally posted by PDM
- I like the exotic drums you used.
- The laughing Sound freaks me out, I don't think it should be there.
- Funny Melody, never expected that I would come across a melody like this.

Really Original, I'll give you that, but not my cup of tea.

-so do i lol

-freaks me out too

-lol yes

thanks

more feedback please

Posted by anth_on_e on Dec-19-2004 18:36:

Imo it gets kind of boring towards the end due to the repetetivity. Maybe if you added another motif or something to spice it up. Im not a producer but thats the only thing i noticed. I wouldnt be able to listen to the whole track again. Good sounds in the beat though and cool sounding synths.

Posted by R.j. on Dec-19-2004 22:33:

quote:
Originally posted by anth_on_e
Imo it gets kind of boring towards the end due to the repetetivity. Maybe if you added another motif or something to spice it up. Im not a producer but thats the only thing i noticed. I wouldnt be able to listen to the whole track again. Good sounds in the beat though and cool sounding synths.

heh thanks. No prob if you're not a producer. yes IMO (how ironic is that? lol) it does get kind of boring. thanks for the comments!

Posted by anth_on_e on Dec-20-2004 00:24:

Anytime. I just picked up a book "The Dance Music Manual" - Rick Snoman which so far is pretty good. It talks about everything you want to know. It has a section on progression and how to keep it interesting. Costs me 50 bucks canadian but id say its worth it, already learned a bunch.

Posted by Subtle on Dec-20-2004 00:44:

hey.. I like the bongo congo. and the bass is ok.. the percs are great.. i dont like the melody that enter in about 3:03 at all, my suggestion would be to remove it completely.. it sounds awful.. the percussions really adds depth and joyment to the track..

I LOVE the 3 first minutes of the track.. GREAT work... but the "melody" that is added at about 3:03 is disturbing, cant stand it... remove that and add something else please..

Posted by R.j. on Dec-20-2004 00:52:

quote:
Originally posted by Subtle
hey.. I like the bongo congo. and the bass is ok.. the percs are great.. i dont like the melody that enter in about 3:03 at all, my suggestion would be to remove it completely.. it sounds awful.. the percussions really adds depth and joyment to the track..

I LOVE the 3 first minutes of the track.. GREAT work... but the "melody" that is added at about 3:03 is disturbing, cant stand it... remove that and add something else please..

lol yes it is getting abit annoying to me.... i'm werking on a new melody right now.

Posted by Steven Hays on Dec-20-2004 16:59:

The percussion is solid man. The laughs do freak the shit out of me as well as I have a phobia for clowns. Ahh...

-Steve

Posted by sooper on Dec-20-2004 22:47:

Hi,

Cool song.. creepy clown

Your percs are cool, though I think one of your samples (a higher tone) has too much reverb on it.

Nice driving bass.

I think the melody takes away from what is a great groovey prog tune.

Intersting stuff - looking forward to hearing more,
Trevor

Posted by R.j. on Dec-21-2004 00:48:

quote:
Originally posted by sooper

I think the melody takes away from what is a great groovey prog tune.

Intersting stuff - looking forward to hearing more,
Trevor

hey thanks for the comment. as for the melody, well i want to be original and have my own sound so i go for anything out of the ordinary.

n' thanks for everyone who is replying.

rj / space pirate