Oceanlab-Clear Blue Water.(DJGuS Remix)

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Posted by DJGuS on Dec-23-2004 21:54:

Oceanlab-Clear Blue Water.(DJGuS Remix)

Hi There Trance headz, new to trance addict & think its Absolutly Magic.
Got A Tune here i made a while back when i first started producing just to pass the time. Think its alright but Totally not polished up,Would just love some 1 to have a listen & leave some feed back.
Will Def have some good stuff up soon though i hope, Can't get of reason v2.5 the now. Amazing.
Made this on Fruity loops studio 4.5 though with some native instruments Fm7,Pro-53, and also used Triangle II.

Oceanlab - Clear Blue Water. (DJGuS Remix)

Had this tune up yesterday but the link wasn't available,Is now though. Oh yeah theres gotta be somewhere Better than Soundclick to upload my tunes for download? if so please tell me.

Cheerz.
enjoy

Posted by EternalMusic on Dec-23-2004 22:12:

yo, Welcome to TA

Listening to the lo fi:

Well i can see your a beginner .The intro is too simple for my like. That bass is thin, you should add some more layers to it. add more percs as well, panned hints, congos etc. The Intermodule pad from Pro 53 is so obvious , it screams.

Just keep writing tracks and slowly you'll get better and better .

Antonio,
P.S - Im using FL, if you need any help, i'll more than glad to help u.

Posted by State of Matter on Dec-23-2004 22:39:

Not bad for a beginner. Couple of pointers:

Bass hits should generally not be on the kick because if they have the proper amount of bass, they will distort. That being said, your bass is a bit thin and could use a lot more low end support.

The Intermodulate Pad definitely screams pro 53, I wouldn't use that pad in an unaltered state.

Your transitions could be improved with filters, snare rolls, reversed cymbals, and noise sweeps.

There's not much more that I can really say, as you continue to produce you will naturally get better, so just keep at it. You have the raw talent for it, just need the experience.