Luke Cloudwalker - Sad City (full 128)

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Posted by Mane on Dec-29-2004 19:20:

Luke Cloudwalker - Sad City UPDATE FULL 192

hello
its my new track under new nick name heh lol, first one was more chilly this is more trance, i hope you will like it, all feedbacks are very welcome

greetings

Lukas

UPDATE

"http://www.sitesled.com/members/mane/luke%20cloudwalker%20-%20sad%20city%20[final][192].mp3"

copy link to browse , ive made some changes here and there enjoy

Posted by Massive84 on Dec-29-2004 21:20:

Nice Kick.

The hihat sounds a bit on the background, i prefer more upfront hihats tbh.

THat synth at 2.10 sounds nice with the melody.

Break sounds oke, not sure about the pinao, sounds random somtimes but then i like it.

I can't really hear an actuall lead or melody which is a bummer.

I'd also recommand looking at the arrangements maybe some more fx.

Further nice mixing IMO.

Thats all

Posted by 1mason11 on Dec-29-2004 23:12:

hi,

great stuff again.like the new kick,also the piano,good chilled athmosphere in the break perhaps the main melo could be stronger or more intensive.but fine work

thx rialto024

Posted by MK-S on Dec-29-2004 23:24:

I like it, the kick as mentioned is strong. Your ideas are sound but nothing really 'stands out'. You definitely have good production skills, so keep it up.

Posted by Xenocreator_PG_ on Dec-30-2004 00:57:

Re: Luke Cloudwalker - Sad City (full 128)

quote:
Originally posted by Mane
hello
its my new track under new nick name heh lol, first one was more chilly this is more trance, i hope you will like it, all feedbacks are very welcome

http://www.sitesled.com/members/man...0sad%20city.mp3

greetings

Lukas

Gday Lukas

Nice work here m8!

The bass drumm is supreme. It is truely thumpen thru my cans!

The hihats are a little soft. I like how you panned it around.

1:10 great rythme!

2:07 another great rythme layer. The pads give this tune awesome emotion.

the pianos are 'OK'

4:10 sweet. I was hoping for a greater creshendo
3:35 sweeter! I now like you hihat work.

6:30 love the break beat! tho it stops suddenly -> weird.

thanx for sharing Lucas.

Posted by Digital Aura on Dec-30-2004 05:01:

...but why is it a sad city?

Bass is definitely solid as mentioned...

The break is nice! Elements tend to get a tad monotonous at times.
I was hoping for a catchy melodic part for that piano... I still don't understand the melody.
They say that if a listener can predetermine how the song is developing it actually is more enjoyable....with this one, I just don't hear a melody and lose interest.

Sorry. Maybe just me.

Posted by Mane on Dec-30-2004 12:13:

thx a lot for feedbacks, really apreciate, about track am glad you like it at some points i will try do a lot better track next time heh

Posted by JohnOC on Dec-30-2004 20:40:

very nice track! the melody perhaps needs to be tuned a bit more, and just to fix some levels. but there is great potential here and over time im sure u will learn the small details that makes a track more fluent

great work mane

Posted by Mane on Dec-31-2004 16:42:

thx for feedback

Posted by staticblue on Jan-02-2005 19:32:

>at first i wasnt too sure about the subbass, but actually it flows very well with the layers on top
>great job for the percs
>synths layers in the buildup are great, so is the mixing in general.
>kick is really lush
>around 3:10 i expected some more dreamy pads
>main melody is kinda dreamy, i like this.. very relaxing and great atmosphere !

>>> good job, i'm really impressed man.
keep them up

static blue

Posted by Sunquest on Jan-02-2005 21:00:

nice kick indeed
i think ur missing a main hi hat between the kicks, so itll make the clap sound more clapy
nice pads, melody is ok, kinda ....
keep at it m8,
hear u l8r

Posted by Mane on Jan-02-2005 21:06:

quote:
Originally posted by Sunquest
melody is ok, kinda ....

hmm crapy hehe?? , thx for comments really apreciate

Posted by Sunquest on Jan-02-2005 21:15:

quote:
Originally posted by Mane
hmm crapy hehe?? , thx for comments really apreciate

didnt mean it in a bad way sorry
i mean like , this is how it usually sounds when ur an amatuer, but u get better along the way... so dont worry

it just means ur normal, don worry

Posted by Mane on Jan-02-2005 21:22:

quote:
Originally posted by Sunquest
didnt mean it in a bad way sorry
i mean like , this is how it usually sounds when ur an amatuer, but u get better along the way... so dont worry

it just means ur normal, don worry

yeah i know i have to improve my melodies its the "weakest link" in my productions hehe lol

Posted by davidemonin on Jan-02-2005 23:56:

Nice melodic ideas in this one. Keep working on the details I and others here have mentioned on msn.

Posted by Mane on Jan-11-2005 20:51:

1st post updated