DJ KaRiMNeT - System K (My New Track !)

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Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-07-2005 12:20:

DJ KaRiMNeT - System K (My New Track !)

Hello all ..

after tribal life i've finished composing and producing my new track : System K

here is a low quality version of da track to get some comments

DJ KaRiMNeT - System K (Original Mix)

edit : File Changed with a 128 KBPS version plz re-download

Posted by Klangzentrum on Jan-07-2005 12:50:

beginns a bit dry...could use an fx-whoosh or crash at the beginning, 2, imo...
bass reminds me somehow on new order - confusion...
nice pads and plucked sound!

i think your track could have some more percs going on...perhaps also an additional synth with a different mellow later on...even it was only a piano that plays one or two times...

nice one!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-07-2005 13:05:

Thanx for listenin' dude

it sounds dry coz of da low quality ..

and about ur comments .. when u listen to the high quality one u will find some differences that u wish

Posted by Klangzentrum on Jan-07-2005 13:07:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT
Thanx for listenin' dude

it sounds dry coz of da low quality ..

and about ur comments .. when u listen to the high quality one u will find some differences that u wish

ok, then i�ve said nothing!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-07-2005 13:10:

lol

i need da comments 2 b better

and thanx again 4 reviewing

Posted by retiro on Jan-07-2005 13:59:

You ought to reverb those perc. in the intro. Nice little pluck during the break - I find a lack of transition creativity here - needs to be sorted out to smooth the tune out! Overall, could be improved, with different synth layers and more perc. to fill out the sound! After that it has potential - keep working at it!

Posted by Sunquest on Jan-07-2005 14:16:

i agree with retiro, could use some more layering to make it fuller, right now its kinda like just background elements of a song, u need something infront, in ur face, something pumping good
otherwise, this sounds like a great gouryella style track i like the beats...
keep it up m8
peace out

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-07-2005 17:34:

retiro .. Thanx for listening and this isn't Final and plz download the 128 Quality version i think u will find some differences

Sunquest .. Thanx for reviewing and plz re-download the 128 quality version to see the differneces

Posted by retiro on Jan-07-2005 18:14:

Re-downloaded and my feelings are still the same! Not keen on that flute type melody you have in the earlier part of the track (the sound I don't like)! What I do like is that pluck! Again I echo that the transitions are pretty bad - especially the one at 2min 45sec! This could be much improved! The mixdown and eq are pretty cool but just tighten up the production!

Cheers!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-08-2005 03:01:

Thanx for re-downloading and i'll try ma best about the transitions by adding swooshes and using some fx ..

Posted by retiro on Jan-08-2005 11:43:

Yeah thats it mate!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-08-2005 19:27:

Kewl

Posted by Nrg2Nfinit on Jan-08-2005 22:18:

can you repost.. its down

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-08-2005 22:51:

the link is working !

Posted by Nrg2Nfinit on Jan-09-2005 00:45:

niece track.. i like the elements

the full kick in from the break down at 5 mins could be improved and made more dramatic to give the track a better punch.. try using some sort of effect to exaggerate that

Posted by doreemix on Jan-09-2005 02:34:

link is not working now, but you already know what i think about this tune.

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-09-2005 19:52:

Nrg2Nfinit
i'm working now on adding some fx

doreemix
link is working now

Posted by doreemix on Jan-10-2005 02:26:

Yes!!

now it's working!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-10-2005 08:53:

cool .. waiting 4 ur opinion

Posted by alexpea on Jan-10-2005 12:14:

It sounds SOOO computerish. The bass, the hihats, and for sure that synth after 55 seconds.

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-10-2005 18:08:

hey dude .. if u r goin to review .. review all of da track not till 0:55

and i'm re-contstructing , producing the track. and i'm glad it isn't Boring

Posted by alexpea on Jan-10-2005 18:20:

Yo, I only have isdn, so I streamed the track, and the first minute was so boring that I didn't want to hear the rest. Sorry...

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Jan-10-2005 23:23:

np dude