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Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-11-2005 16:41:

[techno] Pjotr G - Kohlensaure!

hey peeps,

here's a new techno track of mine.

http://www.whiteroachproductions.nl...Kohlensaure.mp3

The usual percussive ear torturing, you know

I'd like to hear your opinion

Posted by djxtension on Jan-11-2005 17:08:

Ok, here we go:

I like the effect @ 3:45, sounds really cool.

I think it sounds a bit too dull, too empty. It needs a few more elements to spice it up a bit, if you know what I mean. It lacks a bit of strength and power, IMO.

In Nederlands: Klinkt goed, maar mag van mij wel iets steviger en krachtiger. Misschien wat meer elementen toevoegen om de plaat ietsje 'spannender' te maken.

Other than that: Quality, as usual.

Posted by Subtle on Jan-11-2005 17:15:

first.. i dont listen to techno..

the usuall techno beat is playing.. for 1:30 minute before anything happens.. the acid thing is good.. try increasing the volume of the -"crash-ride" i dont like the snare.. sound too thin... the kick sounds very tight.. in about 3:00 minutes.. but the snare is taking all the energy out of the track.. replace it with something else.. otherwise.. enjoyable percussions...

Posted by TOR on Jan-11-2005 17:39:

the acid is cool, though it seems to be too much in the middle of the mix.

i agree about the volume of the ride. the track is not as powerful as it could be.

other than that, this track is well cool.

Posted by eulerfx on Jan-11-2005 19:37:

- percs are nice, but play around with filters a lot more to add some variation. sorta like in "Filter" by Jan Driver or "Groove Attack" by H-Bomb
- i actually like the snare, but make it a bit louder
- where is the bassline?
- overall, like already said, track needs more energy. a simple 4x4 open hat can help with that.

Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-11-2005 22:57:

I had another go at the mix. New file is behind the old link. Reduced snare, gave the kick some more punch, increased rides and ehh generally making it sit better. There is some sort of bassline, it's just not that obvious . It's percussion through a bitcrusher.

Posted by Subtle on Jan-11-2005 23:40:

I just hadd to check if u did something with that snare..

no..no..no.. the snare needs power.. it sounds way too weak *Imagines a heavy snare*

this is how I would have made it if I were u:

This is what I meant..click or dl me..!

Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-11-2005 23:56:

ow....there was never a snare on the 5 and 9....I meant the snare on every 8

there was a clap, but I think it's fine

somehow I expect some kind of ferry corsten - out of the blue remix out of your sample

Posted by echosystm on Jan-11-2005 23:56:

Not really my kind of thing (i dont listen to techno) but it's pretty cool, very catchy

Posted by Subtle on Jan-11-2005 23:58:

quote:
Originally posted by Pjotr G
ow....there was never a snare on the 5 and 9....I meant the snare on every 8

there was a clap, but I think it's fine

somehow I expect some kind of ferry corsten - out of the blue remix out of your sample
i meant the clap daah.. and btw: is put on top of your track.. well.. that was my cents.. keep it up!

Posted by EtherealSL on Jan-12-2005 01:13:

whoa... different than my normal listening style

catchy, cool stuff, i like, but like said before, i think there's no enough variation in the beginning, same thing plays over and over for like a minute (would be nice if you filtered things in and out to keep it interesting)

Posted by J.L. on Jan-12-2005 10:13:

I think the overall percussion is a bit too weak for techno, especially the kick. It is perfect for trance, but just not banging enough for techno.

Personally, I thought it was a bit slow... I was expecting some crazy raw techno I've come to expect from you...

I still enjoyed it though

Posted by .A.Y. on Jan-12-2005 13:09:

hey man
cool track!

but you must add a strong bassline for it..

except that got nothing to say
good job!

Posted by activa on Jan-12-2005 19:32:

Wow,

This is a quality piece of techno. Love it, all of it. Synth work, tempo, percs, all fucking quality.

the kick is fine, the ride is fine. everything is spot on in my opinion.

just the techno i like!

Posted by JohnOC on Jan-13-2005 02:26:

woooooooooooooh some more pjotr G techno!

-loving the beats, solid and chunky as they should be
-great fx and pitch bending...this is fantastic
-synth is lovely and techy........filters mmmm i love this!
-perfection, quirky random techno

10/10

Posted by Pjotr G on Jan-13-2005 13:54:

tnx for ego boost

Posted by mef on Jan-13-2005 14:00:

Love the percs. Follows a nice progression. Crazy synth

Nice work. Always like your techno.

Posted by cybernetica on Jan-13-2005 14:14:

Usually I'm not so much into techno but I'm diggin this very much. Cool percussion, the acidline is just insane... Good job mate