[Trance] dj infinity - sunset [full] 96kbps

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Posted by dj_infinity on Jan-14-2005 05:31:

[Trance] dj infinity - sunset [full] 96kbps

Greetings!

This is a tune i made for my girlfriend (who is my ex now ..)
And i decieded to polish it up and post it for your comments.. and hopefully maybe getting a release (hehe .. everything is possible..
Done in Reason 2.5, Cubase SX
Looking forward for your comments, criticism and input. I will greatly appreciate your opinion. It still needs a polish and this is not a final version ..

It's called Sunset and you get it here:

dj infinity - sunset [96kbps]

(It sounds good for 96kbps btw ..)

Thank you for your attention

Trully yours,

infinity

Posted by eulerfx on Jan-14-2005 09:39:

- nice fx in the intro part
- bass sounds a little weird, though i kind of like it
- i don't really like those synths at 0:28, they seem a little out of place. maybe you should bring them in slowly, subtly.
- the break sounds a littl harsh, some things dont seem to flow together
- the lead melody is too familiar, overdone some many times before
- in general, the structure of the song -> your buildups, crashes, etc are all too common. i would suggest listening to some currect productions and take some advice.

Posted by Subtle on Jan-14-2005 13:02:

96kbps

listening..

off-beat bass.. dark and relaxing.. like the pads in the beginning, change the crash(!) the strings in the break sounds a little too static.. like the melody.. emotional.. but i can swear i heard it before, not bad track.. reminds me a little of Tiesto long ago.. but it sounds too standard for my tastes though.. maybe i should add something new after the second break sounds excactly the same..

Posted by dj_infinity on Jan-15-2005 02:35:

Thanks for reply
yeah i should definately change bass and crash ..
Anyways .. do you think it has any potential ?
Because this is one of my first Trance tunes.. My primary style is Drum'n'Bass. I produce for a project called Hostile Minds. If u want to check that out here it is:
www.hostileminds.net

Posted by EtherealSL on Jan-15-2005 04:25:

checking out your site. wow, neat stuff here, i like it, agressive and dark is how i like my dnb (i'm a big fan of evol intent stuff, karl k/kaos shit)

in regards to "sunset" i don't like your bass synth too much, isn't too prevalent and it seems to come in too slow (as if it's attack knob was turned up too much). i'm not a fan of this melody at all, the progression doesn't seem to take me anywhere.

can't really give you much critism on your saws cause of 96kbps...

hope that helps

Posted by thoughtlessjex on Jan-16-2005 02:19:

I like the first hit. Long and drawn out.

Your melody sounds like old news. It's decent, but no one really cares about this stuff anymore.

I think in general, you seem to be sticking entirely to formula. In some parts, you can feel how forced a transition is.

I think more can be done to punch up the kick.

Posted by pho mo on Jan-16-2005 13:39:

bass is great! a little more attention to the crash cymbals perhaps...
i love the rhythm on the pads, with the lfos and stuff
around 3:40 the tune should be cranking but feels a little empty
5:30 it's sounding like the bass should be in your face a bit more
the melodies and chord progression are fantastic
sorry for the random drunken comments, overall the tune sounds really good! nice work