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Posted by Gibbo893 on Jan-18-2005 12:49:

Please review my debut

You can find it here:

http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=8112

Length 6:06
192 kbs

Produced totally in Reason2.5

Posted by DJ-AXI on Jan-18-2005 16:23:

it was awesome until it stopped at 40 seconds ??????

Posted by Gibbo893 on Jan-18-2005 16:42:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ-AXI
it was awesome until it stopped at 40 seconds ??????

It shouldn't have done that - it doesn't get going properly until a minute in....then something different at 2.58...

try again

Posted by Stino on Jan-18-2005 16:56:

Well...not a bad job for a first production, but you have to learn a lot.

- Snare is to loud
- That first synth is way to thin and is not playing a nice melody
- Your bassline is ok aswell as your FX are
- THe structure of the track is not very logic, there is no real build up.
- All your synths are very thin, very subtractorish and malstromish .
- Nothing happening in the intro so far...doesnt get my attention really
- Very strange structure, you actually have no real climax and final melody...you have no chord changes at all...which makes it very boring.

keep on producing. I guess this is one of your first tracks. I dunno what type of track you want to produce? Trance? I think you have some original structure things but you really have to improve on your sounds and melodies and all, it isnt variating and it doesnt get my attention at all.