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Posted by .A.Y. on Jan-21-2005 12:14:

[uplift..?]hope to get more then 1 comment lol...

.A.Y. - Gravity (2min sample)
02:30 minutes
http://www.o-zen.com/art/bands/22/music.php

still need more work but i dont got the time currectly...

-1:00 dist dunno how it cames there

pleaseee give me some feedback about this track..
thanks

Posted by Jay M on Jan-21-2005 13:11:

Kick sounds oh so familiar.
Nice acid lead. A tad high end would do it good tho.
Overall pretty full sounding.
Percs sound a bit static tho, have another look at those.
Nice strings in the brak, they fill it up nicely.
Bass isn't really clear, try to give it more body! And watch out that it doesn't interfere with the kick.

Good luck!
-Jay

Posted by .A.Y. on Jan-21-2005 19:50:

thanks!
too bad it seems that this is gonna be the only comment..

Posted by tylerc on Jan-22-2005 21:54:

wow, i really like this a lot. i like all the cool distorted synths, lots of sweet sounds. i'm not really sure if i like the synth at that break at 1:00, but its pretty quick. the synth after that is

damn. i love this. the only bad thing i could say about it is that it seems you've distorted a lot of your percussion too, like your snare and ride cymbal. i think its just a bit much, its good to still have some clean sounds in the mix.

awesome work

Posted by Loock on Jan-22-2005 22:18:

hi..

great synth ... wow.. i like it very much !

loop also is very good.. but ill change a kick ..

very good track ! 10/10

Posted by Massive84 on Jan-22-2005 22:43:

good production mate.

this would really do well in a club IMO.

Nice one.

Posted by DJ Chrono on Jan-22-2005 23:35:

I really like it..

Great work, I'd definately like to hear a full version.

Posted by jahala on Jan-23-2005 04:15:

Nice idea, dont like the overall sound of the production - but i think youre on the right track.. doesnt sound like everything else, which is really nice..

Produce more, get more experience - and i think you could make some pretty decent bangin' tracks

- J.

Posted by jahala on Jan-23-2005 04:15:

Posted by pho mo on Jan-23-2005 11:32:

Nice work A.Y!!
The main lead completely rips! When it comes in at 1:14 is a complete dancefloor mayhem
I'd love to hear the rest of the tune, see how everything flows and where it all leads.
The bass end could definitely be tweaked, give it some crunch in a compressor or whatnot. The rest is great, Jay M said tho, a little bit of high on the main lead would make it soar. The kick is great

Posted by Nomen Nescio on Jan-23-2005 20:07:

OOH MY GOD!! The main lead it sounds 3D! It just comes out of the speakers and grabs you! This is awesome. I normally like the more uplifting melodic trancetracks but dude, this is a floorfiller!!

I would very much like to hear the whole track. Maybe it might get a bit too repetitive. But this track really has the energy and as you can see this is not the only respons you have had so far!

Cheers!

Posted by DJ-Kreing^^ on Jan-23-2005 20:39:

The first part of the tune (till about 1:00) sounds really mint. But I didn�t like the second part that much�over all the sound quality isn�t that good, but you have some great ideas and great sound there, it just needs some more polishing I guess.
@ 0:24 its sound amazing, very original and carzy sounding lead.

Well done ahi�

Posted by Sunquest on Jan-23-2005 22:29:

first is first, that acid lead it needs less stereo, and more treble, it sounds too clogged now, wierd, too much in the back not in the front,
the beats are good, so basically u just need fixing on that lead

Posted by .A.Y. on Jan-25-2005 14:16:

wow
i wasn't expected that much comments
i left this site for a few days cause i thought there is no more comments lol

i am really glad that you liked the track..
i promise that when i'll finish the whole track (and it can take a while..), i'll post it here

thanks

Posted by State of Matter on Feb-02-2005 01:54:

Finally listened to this, really cool stuff. Love the synths used.

Posted by Leifo on Feb-02-2005 02:12:

IMO this is bomb genuis! Frantic chaotic 2am battle music!!!! ARG!
Your ideas are great (and not that I could do better) but I think you can work on your mixing and eq'ing. On the right track man!

Posted by AstralNrg on Feb-02-2005 02:21:

Really like what you got going here. that lead is real crazy it like takes my ears puts them in the speakers and bugs them out. I really like your style, its non generic, its original which is a + . Man this is one of the best tracks i hear on this board. Maybe not sound quality wise, but ideas are very nice. We gotta talk.

peace

Jay

Posted by .A.Y. on Feb-04-2005 12:02:

thank you for your comments guys!

Posted by Trancevision on Feb-05-2005 17:05:

really original...awesome acid lead...
WOW !

At last, something really great again here.

Agree with the others. The acid lead sounds good, but needs better eqing to fit with the rest of the mix.

PlEASE make more like this!

Trancevision

Posted by .A.Y. on Feb-07-2005 05:06:

lol
thanks Trancevision

Posted by Rataman on Feb-07-2005 16:49:

Wow!!! I really like this track. Best one I have heard on here so far. I like the part where it really starts going around 1:40. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to hear the full version.

Posted by .A.Y. on Feb-08-2005 15:31:

thanks mate

Posted by tonkproject on Feb-08-2005 19:03:

excellent....the synth sound great but not quite fit with the rest of the track....try the effect only where you have a break or just kick..keep up the good work..

Posted by TonyZ on Feb-08-2005 20:13:

This is pretty funky - reminds me of a Crystal Method song called Blowout, probably because your lead sounds exactly like it!

Nothing really wrong with this, either. Just try and get some more energy in the mix - I think a "Sandstorm" style break would suit it

Posted by .A.Y. on Feb-09-2005 17:49:

quote:
Originally posted by dj_palm
WOW this is the coolest tune ive found here on TA yet, it has some realy cool sounds and very good energy and it gives me that smile ive always lookin for. I would very much have whole version so i could play it on my show. its realy a funny acid sound to it, and realy crazy. maybe needs some mastering on that main synth its realy weird placed in the stereopicture, sounds like its got inverted +- on one channel(the main synth), think it would be cool if it was paning a bit from left to right.
All in all a very original track!!!

edit: btw I talk about "Gravity (2min sample)"

btw what kind of equipment u use. love that phatt,deep sound on it which i realy havin trouble with gettin on reason2,5

i use FL Studio 4 (soon logic), and i used Synth1 for the main lead.
and thanks alot about all your comments!
i'll try to do my best with this track, but im sure it will take a long time..
my mixing&mastering skills are pretty low, and im not gonna finish this track until my skills will be alot more better..
so for the people who asked the full version - well it can take a few months

but again, thank you for all your comments!
its really great to read such a great comments from you..

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