[Mellow Breaks?] Mezzir - Guenevere's Song

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Posted by mezzir on Feb-02-2005 00:20:

[Mellow Breaks?] Mezzir - Guenevere's Song

Mezzir - Guenevere's Song
6:01
128k
not 100% finished, but I feel its ready to be shown. looking for any sort of feedback basically, general opinions or specific criticisms
thanks in advance

edit: updated again. was playing around last night and added some strings to the beginning and i really really like them. still working on mastering etc

Posted by Leifo on Feb-02-2005 02:04:

Pretty bizzare intro That synth makes me feel drunk. Portamento out the butt! I like the direction of the track dude, but it is a little out there. Mixdown needs work. What Progs are you working with?
Just keep working on it. Needs a little more layers, maybe like some different beats, or strings?

edit: or a bridge of some kind

Posted by mezzir on Feb-02-2005 02:15:

yeah i'm adding another layer or two to the bassline and tweaking it a lot
just used fruity loops 4 and z3ta+ with the virus bank
and i'm probably gonna change up the drums a lot more
that link there's only about 2 hours worth of work so the drums are just the same looped
and strings i was thinking of also...something chinese perhaps, like in incubus - aqueous transmission right in the beginning
might just sample that actually
thanks for the feedback

Posted by Sunclyder on Feb-02-2005 12:16:

Hi!!

Nice fx

Hmmm. Your chillout song don't have message for me . Maybe i feel bad ??

I don't know??

Greetings

Posted by The Drow on Feb-02-2005 14:18:

not bad
I don't like the 303 fx.
nice melody.
I don't find it that relaxing but its easy-listening
3/5

Posted by mezzir on Feb-02-2005 15:57:

thanks for the input
when i was first writing the song the harsh odd placed synth really worked for me just cause of the mood i was in when i wrote it, but i changed it around a bit and found something that still has some of the same harsh qualities but w/o being so abrasive, i definately like this version better
also a few more effects added etc, worked on the mix as well

new version edited into the original post, check it out