DJ KaRiMNeT - Pharaos Are Back (Original Mix)

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Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-04-2005 12:28:

DJ KaRiMNeT - Pharaos Are Back (Original Mix)

Hello All ,

I've Finished my new track "Pharaos Are Back"

Track Name : Pharas Are Back
Quality : 192 KBPS
Year : 2005

Download It Here

waiting for your comments

Posted by Sunquest on Feb-04-2005 12:43:

wow luv the intro m8
later on u gotta work on the kick , make it louder, and mmake the bass sharper, maybe less stereo to it, clap is great, the voice rocks!
really attracting my attention this song
lots of great fx
overall i think its great build for a club, would OWN the club
please fix the kick and bass, i want this one badly
thanks m8
hear u l8r

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-04-2005 14:38:

Hey , Thanx for your review and about the kick and the bass i'm working on them mm do you think this track can be signed ?

btw .. here is a pic of me playin' live

Posted by retiro on Feb-04-2005 17:47:

Wow man this is a cool track - very original ideas! Agree with Ron that the kick needs some work to punch it up! Great vocals - who did them? You sorted the transitions out which was a big thing in your previous sample! I reckon given the right label this could defo get released - although I few changes need to make it dj friendly cos the intro seems very long! Needs that kick sorting though! Once you sort this out would you send me a 320k mp3?.... pretty please!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-05-2005 04:46:

Thanx retiro and i'm working on mastering da kick and da bass now
and about da vocals my gf made them and sure thing when i finish it i'll send u the 320 KBPS version and if it gets released i'll make a club mix more dj friendly

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-05-2005 21:17:

so .. any more comments ?

Posted by pho mo on Feb-06-2005 12:15:

great intro, love the spooky pharoah vocal loop
resonant bassling sounds great, but could do with a pounding sub bass underneath methinks
nice synths, lots of interesting filter movement that keeps it alive.
there's quite a few little breaks in this tune, but always kicks back into the main riff. i'd love to hear more of a climax in this one.
nice mixing + production as always!
excellent atmosphere in this one, good work

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-06-2005 17:47:

Thanx pho mo
and wait for my next track

Posted by retiro on Feb-06-2005 18:05:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT
Thanx pho mo
and wait for my next track

You wanna finish this one off first!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-06-2005 18:08:

yea but i'm getting depressed !! coz i work hard in producing and not getting signed !

Posted by DJ-Kreing^^ on Feb-06-2005 18:16:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT
yea but i'm getting depressed !! coz i work hard in producing and not getting signed !

That�s stupid, are you producing only for the purpose of getting signed?

Posted by retiro on Feb-06-2005 18:29:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT
yea but i'm getting depressed !! coz i work hard in producing and not getting signed !

Hey man, these things take time! Ask yourself this... do you produce for the love of trance or just you wanna earn a quick dollar? If for the money then pack up now!

If only it was so easy to click a few bits on FL and you have an instant trance classic - its doesn't work like that!

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-06-2005 20:05:

DJ-Kreing^^ .. ofcourse not but when you get signed you feel that there are ppl who listen to you .. u know what i mean ? i don't wanna get signed for $$
btw .. did u listen to the track ?

retiro .. i know and ofcourse i produce coz i love trance .. if i don't love trance i wouldn't even try to produce a track ! but as i said above when u get signed u get attention so you work harder btw i'm still 17 years old

Posted by retiro on Feb-06-2005 20:54:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT
DJ-Kreing^^ .. ofcourse not but when you get signed you feel that there are ppl who listen to you .. u know what i mean ? i don't wanna get signed for $$
btw .. did u listen to the track ?

retiro .. i know and ofcourse i produce coz i love trance .. if i don't love trance i wouldn't even try to produce a track ! but as i said above when u get signed u get attention so you work harder btw i'm still 17 years old

Not to sound horrible Karim but, you get signed when you have a decent track! That is why we have forums so you can share samples and then members can comment on your work! I am 24, having been producing for 3 years. I still haven't been signed! I have produced with Icone, yet that track hasn't been signed! Having my track on vinyl would mean the world to me! Walking into a club and seeing clubbers dancing to your work - money can't buy that! Until that time every piece of spare time I have is spent producing! I do it for the dream and the passion! Dedication does pay off Karim!!!!

Posted by Axolotyl on Feb-07-2005 04:56:

Hey man, nice track. Quite psy proggy actually. I think that there is room in there for another lead synth arcing right over the top of everything. You a have a solid rolling track but its not standout imho. Work on a kick arse melody to give it a real direction and I think you'll see it really come together. The production is quite nice although I think the kick needs some work as others have said.

Good work, keep on hammering away at it!!

Posted by d-miurge on Feb-07-2005 14:21:

this track is pretty good, I love the intro like Sunquest said, the vocal 'Dj Karim Net' seems a bit 'cheesy', rework on the mastering too and it will be quite good !

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-08-2005 06:04:

retiro .. Thanx

Axolotyl .. Thanx for listening

d-miurge .. Thanx for listening and i'm working on the mastering

Posted by abdallal on Feb-08-2005 07:54:

quote:
Originally posted by d-miurge
this track is pretty good, I love the intro like Sunquest said, the vocal 'Dj Karim Net' seems a bit 'cheesy', rework on the mastering too and it will be quite good !

I agree
the karim net thingy is just way off hand mann....

keep on workin on this track.. n stop thinkin bout geting signed straight away...!!

LaZ

Posted by Nrg2Nfinit on Feb-08-2005 13:30:

got the dark feeling is working well.. the intro is nice

the song itself seems kind of redundant.. maybe try to fool around with the structure .. add take away layers or soemthing make the kick ins more dramatic (like ive mentioned before with your other production)

keep working at it..

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-08-2005 22:54:

abdallal
thanx 4 listening and i'm working on mastering now

Nrg2Nfinit
thanx 4 listening 'n wait 4 more

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-09-2005 17:34:

mmm any more comments ?

Posted by Outrager on Feb-10-2005 03:21:

Hey, not a bad track at all
if it were me id add some pads drenched in reverb, to really thicken it up. With a nice spooky chord progression... rowr.. :P either that or instead maybe do something with the rhythm of that main lead (the one with lotsa resonatey filterage), doesnt really flow enough in my opinion, sounds a tad jerky and needs something to feel the spaces that the rhymth creates. But just some pads over the top would really go down well i reckon.
although thats just my silly opinion :P
anyways, keep up the good work

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-10-2005 14:50:

Thanx for listening dude and i'm working on it and adding a new lead and i'll try add some pads

Posted by DJ KaRiM NeT on Feb-11-2005 15:42:

Final and Full Mastered Version is Ready without DJ KaRiMNeT Jingles

who wants it reply here or send me a pm

Posted by doreemix on Feb-11-2005 18:57:

hi !

well another good track Karimnet, i like this one more than the previous one (System k). But i think you have some problems with transposing (ex. 2:59 and it repeats). i don't know how do u process the kick, but this may help: normalize your kick sample, compress it, then use a limiter, and normalize again.

ps: prepare a remix kit for me!

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