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Posted by moolow on Feb-12-2005 00:19:

Wink Airflow!!!!!!!

Hello


Need some feedback, pleeease!


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http://hem.passagen.se/fievel_83/mu...tinued......mp3


Thanx!


Posted by Icone on Feb-12-2005 11:51:

Hey there!

I think this is beginning to sound pretty nice. I'm not too fond of the chord progression, but the sounds are quite fine I think. Bassline, kick and percussion are good (maybe the percs are just a tiny bit too loud).

I do think the song needs more structure to it, to make it sound more pleasable to the ear.

Hope this helps a little

Bye,
Wim


Posted by moolow on Feb-13-2005 10:19:

Thanx for the advices Wim!
I must say I'm really glad that u like the percussions! ..that's my weakness.


Posted by extalin on Feb-13-2005 13:32:

moolow!

i'm listening right now.

this has a really nice happy feel. i especially like the bass and chords composition (the instruments sound really good too)

spacy fx are good and i can't fault the percs (i might change the open hi hat, but that is just a little picky thing)

good to hear new music from you.

later,
-rob


Posted by moolow on Feb-13-2005 15:07:

Thanx Rob!
I'm glad u like it ..so far.
Maybe I'll re-make it later.


Posted by JoeyEnv on Feb-13-2005 17:43:

Love this. Sounds are crisp and clear. Ah, maybe that chord progression needs work. Percussion is sweet though.


Posted by andreas1999 on Feb-14-2005 09:53:

nice work. i think the kick is a bit un-trancey . but maybe that's the point. i mean, there's no real oomph in it .

but the chords are quite nice and percussions are good. i would probably lower the volume on those rim-shots percs (or whatever it is) just a bit .

good luck with it


Posted by eulerfx on Feb-14-2005 14:43:

- imo percussion is a bit too technic, it doesnt seem to flow along with the beat
- overall, the track seems empty and could use more strings, pads
- the bass is too common, you should try experimenting
- i actually like the chord progression, very chill


Posted by Luke Terry on Feb-14-2005 14:44:



really nice melody, structure and bass is lacking somewhat...

with a bit of direction this could be turned into something really good


Posted by moolow on Feb-15-2005 09:02:

Thanx for the feedback!!


I will put my energy in the chords JoeyEnv (and the kick Andreas )

Am going to make a different buildup (eulerfx & Luke Terry)


Posted by Knatter on Feb-17-2005 20:36:

The tune has a nice feel to it but you need to work on the kick. It's much to weak and needs to be replaced by something much stompier.


Posted by Tech0rz on Feb-18-2005 13:19:

Hmm, it seems a bit plain despite the main synth being so lively. I don't think theres enough to it for my liking, maybe one more lead synth that just draws interest back now and again.

Overall tho i agree with a little work this could be a great track.


Posted by moolow on Feb-19-2005 09:04:

I got the point it needs some fixx..
and I will give it what it need!!



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