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Posted by krivi on Mar-03-2005 23:19:

Krivi - Nocturnal Nation

Ok this is my new tune i finished it but want to hear your feedback and eventually improve it...

Krivi - Nocturnal Nation - 192kbps Download

Posted by re808 on Mar-04-2005 09:06:

I wont go to details. I listened 3 x in a row. I really like the piece. nice pads! I wonder why there is no comments??

great job.
re808

Posted by trancintaiwan on Mar-04-2005 11:31:

link doesn't work for me... some page pops up with a ad that says 100% free hosting

Posted by Diginerd on Mar-04-2005 16:58:

File is broken for me.. Can you repost?

Posted by krivi on Mar-04-2005 21:09:

link is OK! try save as... re808 man i am glad you like it and dunno why here is so dificult to get feedback...

Posted by Diginerd on Mar-04-2005 21:22:

For me the file has a size of 1k. Now I know mp3 does some awesome comprression but that's a little small!!

Posted by krivi on Mar-04-2005 21:40:

sorry man but it seems that there is something wrong with YOUR browser
link work

Posted by Mycron on Mar-04-2005 21:53:

my browser suck aswell

please fix the link, mate

Posted by krivi on Mar-04-2005 22:07:

i am sorry i dunno what's the problem but this is captured on my screen just half a minut ago:

maybe link is closed for some countries or ip blocks i have no better explanation...

Posted by woscar on Mar-04-2005 22:15:

I'm downloading it as we speak. (or post) lol

Posted by Diginerd on Mar-04-2005 22:57:

Hmm must be this location. The link you PM'd me didn't work either.. I'll try from home later

Posted by Force on Mar-04-2005 23:25:

link works fine for me, 'right click - save target as...' (IE user) downloaded 9,73MB

the track:

sounds pretty nice and relaxing to me, the clicks in the 'background' are little too much..., but ok. thats what peeked out at first listen.
dont wanna implement something like a second background melody maybe?
cant really imagine of what I'm thinking of, but something little is missing for me

all in all: nice tune!!!

Posted by aoiro on Mar-05-2005 18:36:

great tune. I send pm.

Posted by davidemonin on Mar-06-2005 10:41:

next post: double posted on me for no reason!

Posted by davidemonin on Mar-06-2005 10:50:

Hey man: Cool melodic/atmospheric ideas in this, but it could use a better kick and bassline. For the kick try to create/find something somewhat more punchy/sharper. Also still need to work the mastering/eq/levels a little.
With a better kick ,like said, and edgier basslines, this could be a real nice tunes. Keep it up

BTW, i think i am maybe going to play your tune "Imnonimato" on my next show

Posted by Luke Terry on Mar-06-2005 17:45:

percs + bass need work. as does the hi arpeg style synth, it sounds very software. melody has the potential to be very nice if a bit more work is put into this

keep at it

Posted by krivi on Mar-06-2005 21:32:

ok people thanx for feedbacks i really see good tips here...thanx

Posted by Jay M on Mar-06-2005 22:13:

Starts of pretty promising but the bass coming there is really disappointing me. Other leads synths are very thin as well.
I'm not too fond of the chord progression too.
I do like the lead thingy showing up in the break.. but it leaves now without any reason.
The break leads to nowhere, this needs some finishing.
The main part with that lead thing back in sounds better.

Overall this has some good potential, but phatten up the synths and the hats and give it somewhat more theme! Nice fx, decent eq-ing, enough synths to fill, buildup is ok, except for after the break, needs a lead there.

I'd say give it just a little more attention!
-Jay

Posted by RickyM on Mar-06-2005 22:37:

hey Krivi

Nice atmosphere you create with the percs at the start - but the bass disappoints me a bit - you need it wayyyy stronger and more 'in your face'...maybe change the arrangement around a bit.
I like the wee melody that comes in at about 2.50/30 minutes, maybe fatten up that synth and raise its volume, bit more feed/reverb.
The pads are a bit 'static' (during the main part), maybe bring a bit of variation.
BUt this is a very listenable tune Krivi, I like the sort of chilled out melody.
So summary-

Improve bass and pads

Thats it

Posted by RickyM on Mar-06-2005 22:38:

oh and i think i hear pads and bass from Albino??

Posted by krivi on Mar-06-2005 22:51:

no it's not albino ...
i am working on bass,pads and improving overall tune